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  • Demonic Beauty
    Aug 2 2:25 PM
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    Okay so ive gone through ALL of the Freewrite topics.
    and picked out the ones that inspired me.
    and all my poems are based on those inspirations

    BUT I need more.
    So give me a topic to write about,
    Could be anything.
    Allthough im not so good at.. happy poetry.
    So make the topic a little.. dark.

    Or something like "Broken glass"

    Even though i made a gory one, and my inspiration was "Walk on snow."
    And another one was "Silver Kiss"

    Nevertheless, I need help, so please? Take the time to help.

  • Just Mercedes
    August 2
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    (edited to remove promoting)

    a contest about loss of innocence?

    • Demonic Beauty
      August 21
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      Uhh..

      Stuck on this one... I think Most Of My Poems Have An Essence Of Loosing Innocence, But it just isnt the center point. ^^

  • AdenRecreated
    August 2
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    Go onto other people's pages and read their works. Check the online list and start clicking random names. You never know what you find.

    --Aden

  • polly filla
    August 2
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    you might like to start checking my contests

  • -BlackKnight-
    August 3
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    Go to "Poetry", click on "Categories" and select "Dark". Start reading poems you find interesting and go from there.

    Or start looking for contests that suit you. Can't be that hard.

  • arafura
    August 3
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    Molten lava.

  • positive anarchy
    August 3
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    Look at old poetry for phrases and ideas that may spark a poem...

    or make a poem about a lonely mime...
    ~Hippie

    • Demonic Beauty
      August 4
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      Thanks

      Lonley Mime Inspired Me,
      It may not be as good as you expected but,
      It turned out okay.
      (edited to remove promotion)

  • Demonic Beauty
    August 3
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    Hmm

    HMM! Lonely mime.
    x]
    COOLIO
    ill try.

    x]]

    Ill try at molten lava,
    But i already have a poem about fire.
    called "Travel The World" [You wouldnt understand the title if you hadnt read it] Lols.

  • mazbaby
    August 3
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    8-)

    Write a poem with a very strong, attention grabing first line.
    topic: -a encounter with danger in a dream-

    • Demonic Beauty
      August 4
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      Thankyou

      This really did inspire me,
      maybe not to how you imagined but,
      (edited to remove promoting)

      • Matt Holck
        August 4
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        ", hurtling toward the plaster wall,
        your ears detect the sickening crack of bones,
        And the yelp of your beloved dog,
        as its neck is snapped,
        and its life is ended,"

        what a horrible image

        • Just Mercedes
          August 4
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          i hate those emo sick puppy poems...

          • Matt Holck
            August 4
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            I own a dog

          • Demonic Beauty
            August 4
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            Yeah, i agree its sick.
            "Emo"
            I dont agree with categorical crap tbh.
            Its just my thoughts written down.
            But i dont feel sorry for putting it.
            Because its me, And how i am.
            And its my Stle of writing

            But sorry if it bothers you.

            • Just Mercedes
              August 4
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              Nonono, you got me wrong - I don't care what you write, or how you write it. I just don't agree with sacrificing puppies for the sake of art.

        • Demonic Beauty
          August 4
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          uhh..

          I just write what i feel and think.
          >_<
          I can help that those feelings cause me to write things what other people might not like...
          >_<
          Its just how i am.

          • Just Mercedes
            August 4
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            It's not poetry if it's not what you feel or think. Keep doing it.

            • Demonic Beauty
              August 4
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              Oh, okay..

              The dog thing was to paint the picture of how out of control she was
              That she would harm the dog she loved.
              So that she could carry on hurting other people/
              "Lust for the kill" You could say.
              That she'd loose all sence of moral and dignity,
              To get what she wanted.

              • arafura
                August 4
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                There's a good word for you... "lust".

                It can be lust for blood.
                Sexual lust.
                A lust for life.
                Hundreds of options really.

              • arafura
                August 4
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                Scrap my last suggestion! You look a lot older in your photo than you are. Sorry.

                • Demonic Beauty
                  August 4
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                  Lol,
                  Ive already done the lust for blood. In my poem "More than deadly."
                  and i know i look older, [lols]
                  Sorry for confusing you. xD

          • Matt Holck
            August 4
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            I've had to control my feelings for a long time

            • Demonic Beauty
              August 4
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              mhm.

              Ive bottled them up,
              and now im on allpoetry,
              im just letting them all flow out of me.
              ve never let anyone see my true feelings before.
              So, its difficult.

  • Teardropz-x
    August 4
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    :)

    how about beneath the eyes, trespass mountain, deep waters, i am waiting, or something along they lines

    • Demonic Beauty
      August 5
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      Hm

      Still trying to get inspiration.
      Ill kept looking, and thinking
      and i might get something.
      Thanks for the suggestions.

    • Demonic Beauty
      August 21
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      Thanks.

      I used "Beneath The Eyes.".
      =]
      Its not too good buh.. mhm x]

  • Fug-azi
    August 21
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    "Vodka Intimate"

    ... but give me twist in the final line, something that makes everything before it read a little different.


  • thinking
    August 23
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    My eyes bleed for the steel passion you stick on your vein.
    ....

  • -BlackKnight-
    August 23
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    Try Not Typing Like This, For Starters.

    • positive anarchy
      August 23
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      Oh my goobers be goobers, that is the single most inspiratioinal prompt I've read in my LIFE...

      *starts to set horribly choppy, misspelled lyrics to a bad disco tune*
      ~Hippie

  • Lancea Optimus
    August 24
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    manbear pig
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