Bencalder

hi, i'm ben

if you like or dislike my poetry then please say so and i'll talk back.

my fave poet is carol ann duffy but lots of people inspier me like Pink and all the amazing people who are open to my work and who not only read it but tell me what they think.

Last seen on Aug 5 5:06 AM 2007. Member since February 11, 2007.
I'm a topaz horse poet for 15 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "death is nither the beginging or end but it is enevitable".
I am a 16 year old guy (England)
I have 15 comments, 26 poems

My Poetry

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my fathers prayer

My father, who art reading this, / Stephen be thy name / Thy kingdom that we live in, / Thy will be done, / By some of us some of the time / Cook us today our daily bread. / And forgive us our trespasses / As we

12 lines, 1 comment, June 22, 2007
year-book

I will miss everyone who / Wrote in this / Every kind word / Every doodle I will miss / Everyone’s voice that I once heard / I will remember every time / I saw a friendly face / Each silly rhyme / But mos

16 lines, 2 comments, June 14, 2007. In Sad
celler door

i have two words JUST for you,
it's personalLy true

4 lines, 2 comments, April 21, 2007
i don't know

I don't know why you’re pretending to be crying
You said that I beat you

12 lines, 3 comments, April 15, 2007

Guest Book

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Rae the MoonShine : Hello there... on February 17, 2007

I thought I'd drop by and check out your page since you entered my contest. Thanks for the note about that, by the way. Looks like you're new, and I get to be the first one to write here. Well, I've only read your contest poem, but I liked it. I'll have to give you a better comment there. And I'll read more of your work as I get a chance. Well, welcome to the world of AllPoetry. I hope you like it.

-Rae
bencalder on February 17, 2007

hi, sign my guestbook please.