Well, I just got into writing poetry this summer term at school. I took a creative writing course centered on Poetry, and have really enjoyed it. I sort of found this site by suprise and thought Id post some of my work to see if other poeple liked it.
So, comment on as many poems as you can! I love the feedback. Dont spare my feelings, if it sucks tell me! Also, tell me if you think something should be changed.
Enjoy!
-Brett
So, comment on as many poems as you can! I love the feedback. Dont spare my feelings, if it sucks tell me! Also, tell me if you think something should be changed.
Enjoy!
-Brett
- Last seen on Jan 25 8:21 AM 2007. Member since June 14, 2004.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 268 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Those who follow the crowd are quickly lost in it.".
- I am a 28 year old guy (USA)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Firefighter/Paramedic, Student.
- I have 268 comments, 1 contest, 21 poems
My Poetry
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the laughing dog lies
unaware of his smile2 lines, 18 comments, July 24, 2004. In Humor -
green growing army
soldiers covering vast land2 lines, 14 comments, July 24, 2004. In Nature -
I hope he is everything for you I wasn’t.
I hope he cares for you as much as I do.
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dreamerofangels on July 13, 2004thanks hun yea hes a big dick head but its cool actually this morning he imed me and apologized but it still doesnt change my opinions all my poems r written about him tho.. ahh nway your peoms are amazing!!!!
all my love
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quality revenge on July 12, 2004It was in response to LarryATillander.
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Cemetery Rose on July 10, 2004Thank you for your comment
Welcome to AllPoetry!
now off to read...... {lalalala}
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InxomniaXpiral on July 2, 2004Hey,i saw your contest and love reading the enteries and saw your thoughts on why you held the competition. I have a group that might lend some help called The Free Love Brigade. it's only a handful of the GLBTetc. poets on ALPO and it's mostly girls, but it might be what you're looking for. I could use more guys
Vi
