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All the birds have flown up and gone;
A lonely cloud floats leisurely by.

We never tire of looking at each other -
Only the mountain and I.

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The birds have vanished down the sky.
Now the last cloud drains away.

We sit together, the mountain and me,
until only the mountain remains.


--Li Bai

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  • Last seen on Oct 22 5:21 AM. Member since April 5, 2008.
  • I'm a diamond love poet for 203 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "broadly myopic, trespassing contradiction".
  • I am a 21 year old guy (Australia)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm drowning in factory noise pollution, dreaming of vagrancy.
  • I am in the groups Comments for All
  • I have 203 comments, 22 poems

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My Poetry

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  • Untitled # 5
    The marquee was full:
    a covering of empty courts;
    12 lines, September 21
  • Untitled # 4
    On an empty window pane
    orchids cloister along the bough--
    22 lines, 4 comments, July 26
  • untitled # 1
    Amongst sober dwellings, hunkering by asphalt
    you will find a child
    20 lines, 2 comments, July 14
  • untitled # 3
    Windswept cigarette smoke dulled morning
    winter sky; already dull.
    12 lines, July 13

Guest Book

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  • yourguardianangel on July 9
    Actually I took my quote from a fiction book called "New Spring" because the I found the wording powerful. But thank u for the correction : )
  • just mercedes : you're invited on June 30
    http://allpoetry.com/contest/2451967
  • vaguelyfamiliar on June 18
    Gosh you're brilliant! A mural calls me paint, but when I have time, I am going to come back and comment on all your poems.

    Thank you for being alive, stranger.

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