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My poor scapegoat,

I almost love you
but would have cast, I know,
the stones of silence.























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  • lyrebird on November 22
    I almost have that poem memorised, you know.

    I can feel the tug ... the wind on her naked front.

    It blows her nipples to amber beads,
    it shakes the frail rigging of her ribs.
    [This was the grotesque imagery.]

    I can see her drowned body in the bog.
    [His objective description.]

    Her shaved head like a stubble of black corn,
    [That's what it actually looked like.]
    her blindfold a soiled bandage,
    [A headband, apparently.]
    her noose a ring

    to store the memories of love.
    [Love, as opposed to sex.]
    Little adulteress, [Little adulterer is more like it.]
    before they punished you

    you were flaxen-haired,
    undernourished, and your
    tar-black face was beautiful.
    My poor scapegoat,

    I almost love you
    but would have cast, I know,
    the stones of silence.
    I am the artful voyeur [Mrs G. totally misinterpreted this word. It drove me nuts.]

    I who have stood dumb
    when your betraying sisters,
    [That's the Irish for you! ]
    cauled in tar, wept by the railings,

    who would connive
    in civilized outrage
    yet understand the exact
    and tribal, intimate revenge.


    Read:
    + Bone Dreams
    + Casualty
    + Death of a Naturalist
    + Limbo [I love this one! I was so angry that we didn't study it.]

  • lyrebird on November 22
    I drove to Palgarup today!

  • tb. on November 21
    i'm not, though you are.

    i hate you.
  • nicki1 on November 21
    I would never break your guestbook, I live for it.

    I don't know, my sleep is shit. Just like everybody else's, I imagine. I hate sleep.

    I know, it annoyed me so much the way she ended it! Jimmy isn't going to be a main character, though, I don't think.
    I'm just coming towards the end of Cat's Eye at the moment. I've had it for a whole fucking year almost, but couldn't seem to read it. I love it now, though.

    You shold get ittttt. I might ask for it for christmas. All I ever ask my brother for is books, which annoys him for some reason.

    This has been such a rambling message! Probably because I've barely spoken to anyone today. Oh, well.

    <3

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