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My name is claire im 21 and from tidworth.i'm mother to one year old braedon gregory-hes the one that holds me together.
my work is not at some of the standards i have seen on here so please feel free to comment on what im doing wrong, my writting is usually lyrical as im a singer and i try to write lyrics for tracks iv been asked to sing on and i try to write my own.some of the poetry on here has been on here since i was 17 and really not very good but its good for me and others to see how im progressing.

hope you enjoy and remember criticism is very welcome here.

  • Last seen on Dec 24 5:27 AM 2008. Member since November 7, 2004.
  • I'm a peridot parrot poet for 35 comments.
  • I am a 21 year old girl (England)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Full time mum / part time student.
  • Visit my homepage at www.facebook/clairejaninemorell
  • I have 35 comments

My Poetry

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  • I have so many thoughts i want to share,
    but few im educated to speak.
    3 lines, 1 comment, December 24, 2008
  • thought id add a bit of humor instead of the usual depressing stuff that i write
    7 lines, 6 comments, January 16, 2005. In Humor, Other
  • Why does she stand alone in the rain?
    i want to touch her, but shes to far away.
    52 lines, 6 comments, January 16, 2005. In Sad
  • I feel their presence around me,
    they touch me,
    51 lines, 4 comments, January 12, 2005. In Weird

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  • archmaiden on January 19, 2005
    i would describe some of my work as painfull and depressing, not all of them are real experiances that i have encounterd.

    also some of my work is a bit weird and well strange.

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