Chained alongside improvised slave
Empty eyes, blinded from bitter tyranny
Revolutions erupting through crave
Memories
Desires
Ambitions
Forgotten and uncanny
~ Erika ~
My poetry varies on subjects depending on the mood I was in to write them. So if i was feeling spiffy my poetry is most likely going to be in the mood of somewhat spiffy ^_~ I hate cursing in my poetry because It breaks up the flow, loses the readers interest ( Depending on the reader of course), and takes you away from the original poetry. In my opinion at least...
And NO i don't have slang in my poetry- same reasons for not favoring cursing in my poetry.
I always enjoy reading some good quality constructive critism on my work because then it allows me to find out what sounds better/ how i can fix up my work to make it sound better for everyone ( including myself.) But please let me emphasize the whole * Constructive * Critism. if you leave a comment which only says: " Wow this poem Sucks." ... -_-;; Thank you!
ANYWAYS onto a bit more about.... ME ^^ ( hehe...because I know you care..*cough*)
Age: 16
Bday: December 12th
Astrology sign: Archer ( Sag.)
IN general? I am almost always confused about how i am feeling and how my emotions work in general so I keep them to myself except my writing normally reflects them. I am a perfectionist and I am a complete nerd to the point where I don't believe It's healthy... ( ^^;; ) I have a book obsession, Art obsession, Unhealthy computer obsession ( -slight sweatdrop- ), and etc. etc.
Dislikes: Butterflys, Cleaning the dishes, spiders, Not being able to see, Judgemental people ( although I admit I am somewhat guilty...), racism, Most people in general.
As long as you don't try and judge me for what I believe in/ How i am I won't do the same for you.
* If you fall into a sewer, are you going to care more about your stench...? Or your fear of drowning? *
Yey for uber long profile that No one reads !! ^^ Au revoir for now~!
Empty eyes, blinded from bitter tyranny
Revolutions erupting through crave
Memories
Desires
Ambitions
Forgotten and uncanny
~ Erika ~
My poetry varies on subjects depending on the mood I was in to write them. So if i was feeling spiffy my poetry is most likely going to be in the mood of somewhat spiffy ^_~ I hate cursing in my poetry because It breaks up the flow, loses the readers interest ( Depending on the reader of course), and takes you away from the original poetry. In my opinion at least...
And NO i don't have slang in my poetry- same reasons for not favoring cursing in my poetry.
I always enjoy reading some good quality constructive critism on my work because then it allows me to find out what sounds better/ how i can fix up my work to make it sound better for everyone ( including myself.) But please let me emphasize the whole * Constructive * Critism. if you leave a comment which only says: " Wow this poem Sucks." ... -_-;; Thank you!
ANYWAYS onto a bit more about.... ME ^^ ( hehe...because I know you care..*cough*)
Age: 16
Bday: December 12th
Astrology sign: Archer ( Sag.)
IN general? I am almost always confused about how i am feeling and how my emotions work in general so I keep them to myself except my writing normally reflects them. I am a perfectionist and I am a complete nerd to the point where I don't believe It's healthy... ( ^^;; ) I have a book obsession, Art obsession, Unhealthy computer obsession ( -slight sweatdrop- ), and etc. etc.
Dislikes: Butterflys, Cleaning the dishes, spiders, Not being able to see, Judgemental people ( although I admit I am somewhat guilty...), racism, Most people in general.
As long as you don't try and judge me for what I believe in/ How i am I won't do the same for you.
* If you fall into a sewer, are you going to care more about your stench...? Or your fear of drowning? *
Yey for uber long profile that No one reads !! ^^ Au revoir for now~!
- Last seen on Jun 24 12:30 AM 2008. Member since November 22, 2003.
- I'm a obsidian idea poet for 610 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "I rather die standing then live on my knees.".
- I am a 16 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a artist.
- I have 610 comments, 5 contests
My Poetry
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Overlook the essentials / And tell me what do you see? / Do you see that ghost of the past or the disgusting future? / With peeling skin and bone peaking out to greet the world / Catch the crimson slipping through o
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Casting dark-toned eyes with spider-long eyelashes towards the sky / I glimpsed the trailing white foot prints / Made by tiptoeing jets high above / In the blue abyss known as the world above Earth / Although th
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Cradled within this withdrawal / Take this bleeding heart / In clenched fists / And toss it in to that hole you call hell / And watch the veins crack in those putrid flames / The melting organ twitching on the groun
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Same as walking down nameless streets
With saran wrap plastered across her face
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forgotten hopes on October 21, 2006writers block? hmm thats always tough. i'm doing a writing class for my drama degree and we learnt some exersises like thinking of an important event in your life happy/sad and try to write about it using only verbs nouns adjectives and adverbs no the if but and ect. tis hard but cool try stuff like that it may help!
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Behind This Smile on July 27, 2006hehe
not much here
just getting ready for work >.<
ugh -_-
haha anyway, how bout you?
ah, and no problemo thank YOU
for the comments and applaud =) -
Behind This Smile on July 26, 2006hey!!!!
*waves like crazy*
it's me jessica
from VampireFreaks!
you know SamexLastxDream
yeah so i'm gonna go read
some of your poetry now
just thought i'd stop and
say hi!
hehe
{[Jessica]} -
A Heart Of Ash on July 24, 2006Yes it is ^.^. Some times I feel that way but I rarely have emotions any more only about one or two of my friends or whats left of my friends can still make me smile.
