Sooo... I think its time for me to update my description of myself, lol. Wow, not really sure what I was thinking the last time, very repeititve. Anywho, I'm 21 years old, I'm not as into my poetry as I used to be... I really need to get back into it, it was a lot of fun... Yeah so... I'm off to attempt to write! Read and comment, I'm interested in what you think! ^.^
Dear God, by XTC
Dear god, hope you get the letter and...
I pray you can make it better down here
I don't mean a big reduction in the price of beer
But all the people that you made in your image
See them starving in the street
'Cause they don't get enough to eat from god
I can't believe in you
Dear god, sorry to disturb you but...
I feel that I should be heard loud and clear
We all need a big reduction in amount of tears
And all the people that you made in your image
See them fighting in the street
'Cause they can't make opinions meet about god
I can't believe in you
Did you make disease and the diamond blue?
Did you make mankind after we made you?
And the devil too!
Dear god don't know if you noticed but...
Your name is on a lot of quotes in this book
And us crazy humans wrote it, you should take a look
And all the people that you made in your image
still believing that junk is true
Well I know it ain't, and so do you
Dear god
I can't believe in
I don't believe
I won't believe in heaven or hell
No saints, no sinners, no devil as well
No pearly gates, no thorny crown
You're always letting us humans down
The wars you bring, the babes you drown
Those lost at sea and never found
And it's the same the whole world 'round
The hurt I see helps to compound
That father, son and holy ghost
Is just somebody's unholy hoax
And if you're up there you'll perceive
That my heart's here upon my sleeve
If there's one thing I don't believe in
It's you
Dear god
Dear God, by XTC
Dear god, hope you get the letter and...
I pray you can make it better down here
I don't mean a big reduction in the price of beer
But all the people that you made in your image
See them starving in the street
'Cause they don't get enough to eat from god
I can't believe in you
Dear god, sorry to disturb you but...
I feel that I should be heard loud and clear
We all need a big reduction in amount of tears
And all the people that you made in your image
See them fighting in the street
'Cause they can't make opinions meet about god
I can't believe in you
Did you make disease and the diamond blue?
Did you make mankind after we made you?
And the devil too!
Dear god don't know if you noticed but...
Your name is on a lot of quotes in this book
And us crazy humans wrote it, you should take a look
And all the people that you made in your image
still believing that junk is true
Well I know it ain't, and so do you
Dear god
I can't believe in
I don't believe
I won't believe in heaven or hell
No saints, no sinners, no devil as well
No pearly gates, no thorny crown
You're always letting us humans down
The wars you bring, the babes you drown
Those lost at sea and never found
And it's the same the whole world 'round
The hurt I see helps to compound
That father, son and holy ghost
Is just somebody's unholy hoax
And if you're up there you'll perceive
That my heart's here upon my sleeve
If there's one thing I don't believe in
It's you
Dear god
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- When I'm not writing, I'm a Student.
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angelicverse on February 23, 2006Did I put you out of your misery?? ^_^ I updated!! I'm sorry it took me so long! I'm so very slow apparently! ^_^
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Eagle girl on January 27, 2006I really hope you can put up some more emerald and crimson. It is really good and I have been checking up hoping to see an update - but you haven't updated yet!
I hope you do soon, this is really good - so good that I want more!!!!! Please put some up soon and put me out of my misery!! -
Zsadist Gates on October 31, 2005I'm glad you're enjoying my Harry/Draco story. ^-^ I'm enjoying your Tom/Harry crossdressing one very much! You're incredibly silly and I love it! (and Harry makes a very attractive woman! hehehe)
Oooh, and Happy Halloween! -
Kansas June on October 31, 2005happy halloween!!
