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Hi, i'm holly...this i suppose, is just a place to write, a place where i can put thoughts down in to a context that is not always as complex as the way i see them.

I don't mind what you think of my writing, and comments would be apreciated.
In your comments on my writing i would like to see:


Critical reviews,
Good and bad points,
general thoughts.



lists of things:

favourite things, in no particular order:

1. school...well lessons, haha what a geek i sound.
2. My bed, means going to sleep, never a bad thing.
3. being outside, i love it!
4. doing exercise.
5. running, i run everywhere!
6. meeting new people.
7. hugs.
8. laughing or making people laugh.
9. having good days.
10. listening to songs i like.
11. reading.
12. writing.

favourite food:

1. pasta.
2. chicken.
3. ice cream...lol.

people, definitely in no particular order they all mean so much.

1. legeon...but of course he is the most important!
2. rhi
3. meg
4. amy.
5. jen.
6. Katie.
7. kayleigh.
8. jack.
9. nilesh.
10. mia.

there's so many people i could name but i'd be writing forever!!!! and of course my family come in to that list as well!

Favourite songs:

1. can't catch tomorrow.
2. kill the director.
3. moving to new york.
4. hurricane jane.
5. viva la veda...can't believe coldplay didn't have a number 1 in the charts before!
6. wonder wall.
7. 1985.
8. teaching myself to dream.
9. shine on.
10. the trick to life.

least favourite things:

1. feeling ill.
2. getting bad grades at school.
3. doing exams, unless its maths, that's fun!
4. being tired.
5. milk...yuck.
6. getting messy or dirty.
7. being late for school, i get really frustrated then lol.
8. chemistry...yuck yuck yuck!!!!!!!

thanks for spending the time to read my rather...confusing, crazy page generally about my thoughts and things like that!!!