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poet. optimist. childless. embracer of chaos. lover of order. patriot. leftist. buddhist. brown. animal lover. tree hugger. lucic dreamer. pizza eater. introvert. taurus. schizoprenic. tarot reader. female. music lover. good friend.




My Body Aches for You

My body aches for you,
but you're not here.
Closest thing to you, this music in my ear,
this divine,
enchanting,
music I hear pound and roll,
like my body turning
and growing bold beneath these sheets.


Rain, a soft velvet pound
against the window's pane,
and spray.
The drummer sprays and pounds
like a bold moon waxen,
then wanes
away, to no sound, no light


I wait for you
says the voice in the night
in my ear.
Still, not your breath.
Still, not your voice I hear.
Still not your warmth upon my back.
Still,
I want you near.
My body aches for you,
but you're not here.
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  • strings from heart
    on Mar 12 2010 11:36 PM
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    hi there menda!
  • iamvered
    on Feb 23 2010 04:40 AM
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    Very moving... thanks for sharing this.
  • laura0757
    on Feb 19 2010 07:02 PM
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    one more thing...menda.
    i like my own lines there too..but i can change that and mix and match then at whim..on this subject
    so i create better ones..
    thanks..for the quoting of my words..it did not go unnoticed so i came back.

    laura.
  • laura0757
    on Feb 19 2010 06:59 PM
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    hi.. i love your write...
    but thanks so much for mine..
    i feel a litter overwhelmed..by the fuss..
    but so worth it...
    laura ps.
    my brother is my soft soft soft

    hard....

    as hell hard...

    spot..........
  • Salt
    on Feb 11 2010 01:11 AM
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    My Body Aches For You: Wow. Loved the imagery and the intimacy of this one. "Rain, a soft velvet pound/against the window's pane..." Fantastic.
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