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Addline: Your deepest feelings

StarhikerI guess everyone needs a little inspiration
once in a while, and I started this addline
to start a little brainstorm on feelings...

I don't want 'ordinary' feelings, but I want
you to dig deep inside and tell me the one
feeling you feel deepest inside you!

Come on, give it your best shot! You can add
as many lines as you want, until you're out
of words. The more the better!

An example: Remorse for giving someone pain

Bride Of Hate
StoricA yearning for someone who didn't say goodbye
Bride Of HateThe pain and loss for letting someone go
malkinpussyour absence is a hollow ringing in my marrow
each day and all tomorrows a void remains
my yearning is an echo of mourning bells that toll
torturing my conscience, withering my soul
with scathing recriminations haunting me inside
because I never had the chance to say ...goodbye
epitaph-macabrerepect and fear are not the same thing... what one did you think you had while hitting me. I am here telling you you had neither one!
captain splatLike the morning mist upon your grave and just as the moss clings to the stone, we will always be together.
Huntressunseen scars scraping on bone
Highof75Hugs and squishy teddy bears
Friends and beautiful skies
Breast and pretty underware
And the guy who'll never be mine
gumbigrlsisThe pain that stabs you like a dumb knife.  The pain that makes you bleed deep inside.
abernaithRed skies, red skies are all I see
And you and I, no longer free
From the chains of the apple tree

The swing used to hang on a branch
And you'd push me to flight, a small chance
At heaven, stopped by the very same hand

Good rain, good rain falls on parched earth
My lips are stitched shut by mother's needle
I wish I hadn't known you before my birth

But we are soulmates...
And that makes the sundering...
All the more painful.
gumbigrlsisThe anger makes you scream out! Yell out and let it all out. The depression is to much you feel as if though you are just going to grab a rope and kill yourself. The pain is to much to bear. The freedom sets you free like a baloon flying up in the sky.
StoricTo hold again the child so cold
to feel some warmth, to see a smile
my infant son, just four hours old
to hold you for a little while,
just time enough to say good bye
PookiebubuJust a pinch to help me feel your pain
Drops of blood like drops of rain.

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