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Hi!
I'm Tikki (don't mock the name! )

At the moment I just have no inspiration to write. My life is pretty boring, and I find that the best poetry comes from your experiences. So until life livens up, I apologise for the less than up-to-scratch poems .

Feel free to critique my work. If you have a poem you think I'd like, let me know! I love reading other peoples' work.

Ta ta!


You're just a face in the crowd
A tiny hole in the cloud
You're trying to find your way in
To let your soul shine back out
We're just a twist in a seam
A splash of paint on a screen
We're making all kinds of shapes
Somehow we can straighten out the bends

This is our time, we can't rewind
Our place to shine out, we can live it anyway
This is our time, to feel sublime
Our place to shine now, and we can do it anyway
We can't rewind

Lyrics from Feeder, We Can't Rewind

bored, so:
( ) Smoked a cigarette
(X) Drank so much you threw up
(X) Had feelings for someone who didn't have them back
( ) Been arrested-
( ) Gone on a blind date
(X) Skipped school - the occasional lesson. And most General Studies lectures
(X) Seen someone die - yep. I work in a hospital. Happens all the time.
(X) Been to Canada
(X) Been to Florida
( ) Been to Mexico
(X) Been on a plane
(X) Been lost
(X) Been on the opposite side of the country
(X) Gone to Washington , DC
(X) Swam in the ocean
( ) Felt like dying
(X) Cried yourself to sleep
(X) Played cops and robbers
( ) Recently colored with crayons - unfortunately, not too recently
(X) Sang karaoke badly - I have all the singstar games. I'm pretty sure that counts!
(X) paid for a meal with only coins
(X) Done something you told yourself you wouldn't
(X) Made prank phone calls
(X) Laughed until some kind of beverage came out of your nose
( ) Laughed until liquid came out of the other end
(X) Caught a snowflake on your tongue.
(X) Danced in the rain
(X) Written a letter to Santa Claus
( ) Been kissed under the mistletoe - I don't think I've been under mistletoe :S
(X) Watched the sun rise with someone you care about - my 5 favourite people
(X) Blown bubbles
( ) Made a bonfire on the beach
( ) Crashed a party
(X) Gone roller-skating
(X) Ice-skating

  • Last seen 6 hours ago. Member since November 24, 2005.
  • I'm a carnelian hope poet for 147 comments.
  • I am a 18 year old girl (Great Britain)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm working in a hospital - and on a gap year!.
  • I have 147 comments, 4 contests, 39 poems

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