A promise kept• Show poetry

well, im not really a poet at all, im doing this to help me write some songs...you see, my dream is to be in a band, which im starting as we speak...when i post these poems, the words are to become lyrics for songs that i write...ive already finished the song for the poem *First* as seen below, so i might just post the song on here someday! : )

btw, i wrote a poem entitled "The Uncertain" and i decided to delete it because i entered it in a contest today...just so u know, i really appreciate all of the comments i got on it...and im going to be putting it back as soon as the contest is over...sorry for the mix-up!

btw, i totally won that poetry contest!!! im about to put "the uncertain" back on, but it may take me awhile! im so excited, i'll be published for the first time!

hhmmm, my lifes not all that interesting...

here are some of my fav bands: the starting line, yellowcard, story of the year, trapt, transition, hit the lights, sugarcult, all american rejects, 12 stones, straylight run, new found glory, sum 41, evanescence, fall out boy, finch...i may add more later on, dont really have time to list them all right now...

poets i know and respect:
emochild
MiniMike
poetic screamer
brokenpoet
Mark Glinka
BlackRainbowC
Gothica

u guys rock and are the reason ive been doing this, thanks for the inspiration!!!


"in the first part of the shoot, i was using an orange pick, but im gonna f*ck w/ everybody, and now im gonna use a yellow pick!!! only a few ppl are gonna know about it, and its gonna be all over the internet and bunny, its gonna be crazy!"
Kenny of TSL, talking about the best of me video

"so hold me close, but dont get too comfortable
cause this might be the last time you hear my voice..."
At 6 We Go Live, Hit The Lights

"Sunset Wakeup,
hold on to everything
if waking up means this is just a dream,
then id rather sleep
count every star,
maybe we'll meet again so far away from here
maybe this time next year
and i wanna stay forever,
but i know i should be on my way
lets run away together
i know everything will be okay..."
11:05, Transition

"open up my eyes, so i can see that there is more out there,
than you and me, i know there's something better...
it's too bad that i regret the day i left
a place called, Carolina, its where we run to forget all our problems,
let's go, to Carolina without a perfect reason just as long as we don't go home
breathe in, breathe out so i can suffocate, these feelings that will never go away
open up my eyes, fill my head with lies so i can't live, without you..."
Carolina, Transition

"bound to say something, eyes closed
its cold and im home
i feel like nothing, again
pretending not to care, but i care, and i care
dont say another word...
i guess that goes to show
just what ive been going through
more nights of hugging my pillow, oh
replaying memories,
sing this song for me
and tell me how youll never leave my side
ill meet you at 7, i miss you already, goodbye to you
the last goodbye ill ever say to you..."
Cheek to Cheek, The Starting Line

"Until the day I die,
I'll spill my heart for you..."
Until the Day I Die, Story of the Year

"I'm sorry for every apology,
but you'll never know how much you mean to me
until you, put me in the ground
until my body gets found, until the day im buried
you'll find me, at the end of my rope
hanging on your every word..."
All or Nothing, Hit The Lights

"I'd do anything, just to hold you in my arms,
to try to make you laugh, cause somehow i cant put you in the past,
I'd do anything, just to fall asleep with you,
do you remember me? cause i know i wont forget you"
I'd Do Anything, Simple Plan

"I found a line, and then it grew, i found myself still thinking of you,
i felt so empty and now i find, but still its burning, when will you be mine?
too much of the same stories in our lives, i think its time for change, dont you?
too much of the same stories in our lives, i think its time for us to walk away from here...
do you remember lying on the beach late at night?
do you remember running through the sprinklers that night?
do you remember all the songs that i have wrote for you?
all the songs that i have wrote for you..."
Stories, Trapt

"Close my eyes, let the whole thing pass me by,
theres is no time to waste, asking why
ill run away with you, by my side,
ill run away with you, by my side,
i need to let go, let go, let go of this pride,
until this echo, echo, echo, echo in my mind,
until this echo, echo, echo, echo can subside..."
Echo, Trapt

"And every time i think i finally made it,
i learn im farther away than i have ever been before
i see the clock, and its ticking away, and the hourglass empty
what the f*ck do i have to say?
please help me cause im breaking down
this pictures frozen and i cant get out...
please help me cause im breaking down
this pictures frozen and i cant get out of it...
keep it inside, the image portrayed
as if i couldnt stand losing, as if i couldnt be saved, no way
a small confession i think im starting to lose it
i think im drifting away from the people i really need
a small reflection on when we were younger
we had it all figured out, cause we had everything covered
now were older its getting harder to see,
what this future will hold for us, what the f*ck are we going to be?"
Still Frame, Trapt

"as i sing you to sleep,
i hope my ghost haunts your dreams, lost in your memory,
as bad as it seems, i hate the way you say i told you so
this is for
all the wilted petals on the floor
this is for
the waste of a dozen roses, maybe more
this is for how you deserve, nothing more from a rose than a thorn, than a thorn..."
Loose Lips Sink Ships, Hit the Lights

"Now you're gone im wondering why you left me here
i think about it on and on and on and on and on again
i know you're never coming back, i hope that you can hear me
im waiting to hear from you, until i do
you're gone away im left alone, a part of me is gone and im not moving on, so wait for me, i know the day will come...
ill meet you there
no matter where life takes me to
ill meet you there
and even if i need you here, ill meet you there..."
I'll Meet You There, SP

"you can sleep in your own bed tonight, sleep away a silent pain, screamin out my name..."
#5? idk...TSL

"it says hold on and take this ride, and set aside
memories of all the times, when you collide, then you'll leave me here to die, heres the things i meant, but i never said!"
This Ride,TSL

"can i sell the sunrise in return for a sunset yeah...
can i just be here one more day?...
im taking pictures, of everything, to remind me of the place thats so perfect for me,
im taking pictures, of everything, so go ahead and take this place away from me..."
idk...TSL

"when the sun came up we were sleeping in
sunk inside our blankets, sprawled across the bed and we were dreaming
there are moments when, when i know it and, the world revolves around us
and we're keeping it, keep it all going
this delicate balance, vulnerable all-knowing
...sing me something soft, sad and delicate, or loud and out of key, sing me anything"
Existentialism on Prom Night, Straylight Run

"My pen is the barrel of the gun, remind me which side you should be on"
The Pros and Cons of Breathing-Fall Out Boy

"Am I more than you bargained for yet? I've been dying to tell you anything you want to hear, cause thats just who I am this week...I'm just a notch in your bedpost, but you're just a line in a song...drop a heart, break a name, we're always sleeping in and sleeping for the wrong team...We're going down, down in an earlier round, and sugar, we're going down swinging, i'll be your number one w/ the bullet, a loaded god complex, cock it and pull it"
Sugar, We're Going Down-Fall Out Boy

"i quit...LIFE!!!" - me

those are some of my fav quotes from songs...ill try to put more later on...


well, thats pretty much me!!!