My writing reflects my mind - emotionally disconnected, rational, logical, defined, pretentious, and unedited. I'm a self-referentialist puppet - Zero
- Last seen on Aug 28 12:55 AM. Member since August 16, 2005.
- I'm a lapisLazuli dream poet for 308 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is Raise Him to the Cause.
- I am a 26 year old guy (Australia)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a paper weight.
- I am in the groups Allpoetry Friends, Hip Hop and Poetry, Poets with mental health problems
- I have 308 comments
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I'm told to be, for life is something to do,
As though somehow life is less tangible and separate from me,47 lines, 12 comments, October 22, 2005. In Society
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If i could dissect my Achilles heel
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I've tried to play the part either and all ways,
Dressed down to nothing more than a remnant of a faded. operatic. dramatisation.36 lines, 4 comments, January 15, 2006. In Lyrics -
WORK IN PROGRESS...I'm stuck...40 lines, 6 comments, November 16, 2005. In Personal
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I have seen you, my child, always up close hearing the call.
You have heard this call, have you not my child?95 lines, 14 comments, November 3, 2005. In Abuse
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Z-0 on September 11, 2006Sydney, Redfern. You?
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Heaven Nevaeh on September 11, 2006HEEEEEY I'm Australian too, where exactly?
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Z-0 on November 5, 2005The whole purpose of the piece was to cause unrest in the reader. It was not meant as a prelude to a series or story of redemption or reprisal. If it disturbed you, then it served its purpose.
Edited on Nov 05, 3:11 p.m. because ''. -
OK I understand that yes this does happen, but why would you want to write like that with out having a follow up talking about what will happen to the one who commited this? After all Raise Him to the Cause? It would be better to tie a mill stone around his neck than to cause any of His lambs to stumble! Right? It seems you are getting close but that piece really bothered me.
