I WILL RETURN ALL COMMENTS, it might take awhile, but they will be returned, and if anyone just wants me to comment on their works for critiques or general thoughts then just message me. I am busy and not always around, but I try my best!
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Thanks to everyone whoever commented on my works or supported me in any way, shape or form!
" So how many more examples until we break?
How many sacrifices must we make?
'cause we've all been there once before
and it looks like we've returned once more,
is this the beginning or the end?
The last two soldiers on the battlefield
survivors of the war,
they aim at one another while their mothers beg the lord.
"If you're listening, I'm missing him
so somehow bring him home.
How did it come to this?"
So the soldiers lift their rifles and
they're aiming at the head.
They think of their first love before they take their final breaths
and somewhere in the distance
they hear something someone said: "How did it come to this?"
And as you close your eyes for the big sleep
I hope you think of me, Yeah. "
THE BIG SLEEP - STREETLIGHT MANIFESTO
- Last seen on Nov 17 7:02 AM. Member since January 13, 2005.
- I'm a lapisLazuli dream poet for 321 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is ""Jumping off a bridge, its just the farthest I've ever been" - Gin Blossoms".
- I am a 20 year old guy from Massachusetts (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Juice-box junkie.
- Visit my homepage at Gotta find it for yourself
- I am in the groups A Place to Vent, Beautiful Minds Dark Addictions, Theres Something Sexy About the Rain, love poems
- I have 321 comments, 39 poems
My Poetry
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A dozen shards of glass dripped from the fountain to my feet,
Saphire gems that held my heart seizing it like concrete13 lines, 1 comment, October 25 -
My heart did beat out of time,
With a thought more than sublime. -
Her childhood friends ages long gone
made mornings sigh and long nights yawn.16 lines, August 1
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