- Last seen on Nov 18 8:58 PM. Member since March 14, 2008.
- I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 61 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "To dare is to lose one's footing momentarily. To not dare is to lose oneself. - Soren Kierkegaard".
- I am a 16 year old girl from Illinois (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm overexerting.
- I have 61 comments, 1 contest, 17 poems
My Poetry
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Inspired by Stevens, Coval, Sexton, Boston, and Strangers.
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Hinsdale Central football is amazing.61 lines, February 20. In Other
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A group poem. Two turn-o'-the-century philosophers. Real quotes. And two others explain their ideas.
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So, poetry club's prompt of the week was dancing...
Deciding to break from the cliché, I wrote this one Béquer-style. (¡Las Rimas!)34 lines, 1 comment, February 11
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bowl of oranges on October 17, 2008GASP yayz yous has allpoetry!
I love the fact that I decided to use terrible grammar and spelling on a site dedicated to language. -
Kaite Zampa on August 7, 2008i love your Aphrodite poem. A bar run by the goddess of love and beauty would be a bar where i was a regular
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Phineas Red on July 5, 2008you should be in bed.
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lovelyeyes15 on June 10, 2008Hey Angelica, I'm guessing you'll know who this is. I read iPledge, and I happen to think it's true, funny, and makes you say "amen" inside. It also flows incredibly well and I love the ending.
In your writing you display a great deal of fluidity, which most don't have a good habit of doing. In addition, I feel you grasp a lot of good ideals most people don't seem to care about and you tell your side well.
Perhaps that can be taken more as compliment than criticism, but I'm sure that there is nothing wrong with your words or rhymes.
Keep writing! ;]
