These things take my
Time and energy
Don't stand too close
Without apologies
Cutthroat; cut out
Candid glimpses and
Wind me up; I'm ready
Can't escape this line of best fit
I remember being inside
Something more than you...
Line of Best Fit by Benjamin Gibbard
Time and energy
Don't stand too close
Without apologies
Cutthroat; cut out
Candid glimpses and
Wind me up; I'm ready
Can't escape this line of best fit
I remember being inside
Something more than you...
Line of Best Fit by Benjamin Gibbard
- Last seen on Nov 15 9:01 PM. Member since November 19, 2003.
- I'm a lapisLazuli dream poet for 322 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "It is one thing to show a man that he is in error, and another to put him in possession of the truth".
- I am a 22 year old man from Oklahoma (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a college student.


- I have 322 comments, 1 contest, 126 poems
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Your dirty teeth, your raunchy breath
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Through Iv'ry I send fictions—False
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Discretely being space to space
But existence must be continuity20 lines, July 30. In Personal
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Mandy Pants on September 30ok im disappointed that i wrote like three new poems and you refuse to read them>

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Mandy Pants on January 8, 2008so this new quote on your page....was like a rap song to me. lol. i love it!
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Mandy Pants on July 16, 2007dont hate me because i left a long commenty comment.
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Mandy Pants on June 6, 2007can you reread fallacy for me. she asked me to change it to 6 syllables per line, not less. so i did. just a quick read to make sure i didnt completely ruin it. if i did i will remove it from teh contest lol. idk what else to do with it.
