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Woes of a heart

Im pretty new to the whole poetry deal but so far I enjoy writing it and reading it.  It is such an amazing way to express what is truly in your heart.

Well its been a while, but im back. I still an new at this but i love writing.

  • Last seen on Aug 14 9:59 PM 2006. Member since November 28, 2003.
  • I'm a carnelian hope poet for 131 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Every time U leave I pretend that Im OK".
  • I am a 16 year old girl
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  • on May 2, 2005
    about what you wrote on life of lies, she doesn't love me back and this was about something she said in church so it's nothing new anymore, but thank you very much and i'll try to get to you're poems too.
  • Woes of a heart on April 19, 2005
    Precious, I stoped coming on this site but im back and I seriously have though out you SO much. I love you with all my heart and miss you so much. I have been trying to email you....please comment
  • on November 19, 2004
    "tears streamed down my face
    i looked into the mirror

    to my surprise i saw you behind me
    but you were to late
    the knife had gone thru

    i fall to my knees and
    stare into your eyes

    it hurts me to see that
    tearful stare

    the blood soon started to flow
    my voice whispered in your ear

    'I want you to know
    you helped me thru alot
    but this time
    my emotions took over my body
    now i shall give you a hug....
    ignore the bloody wrists
    for not even i knew a knife
    could cause such bliss.'

    you sit down next to me
    wiping of the tears
    you look into my eyes

    'the knife you used has once again
    defeated another child
    you haven't even turned 13
    but i want you to understand
    you hurt all of us
    by taking that knife and making
    the final cut....i love you and
    i will miss you....'

    i see you and my other friends
    standing side by side....

    'stacy,jayden,nessa
    cortney,andrea,amy
    caroline,candice,jaimee
    anita,christina,and laurel....
    you all came to say goodbye'

    stacy holds me in her arms
    our eyes meet
    i give her a weak smile
    and my vision blurs out in defeat.

    you sit there for awhile
    before you realize
    that this time i closed my eyes
    never to be seen again.

    your shirt is covered in blood
    and the knife i used
    seems to haunt you forever....
    but inside i tell you

    'it wasnt your fault....i was just confused'"

    GOOD BYE MELISSA! NICE KNOWIN YA!
  • on November 15, 2004
    melissa.....i understand.....u can be mad at me all ya want........I'm sorry.......

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