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Hi, I'm Brittany. I'm 16. I guess I write free-form poetry.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE leave me any kind of comment after reading one of my poems so I don't feel like I am wasting my time!!!
And....I put "other" as the type for all my poems because I think anyone can make it out to whatever they feel it should be, and to label it puts on too many restrictions.

Admonitions
Sylvia Plath

If you dissect a bird
To diagram the tongue
You'll cut the chord
Articulating song.

If you flay a beast
To marvel at the mane
You'll wreck the rest
From which the fur began.

If you pluck out the heart
To find what makes it move,
You'll halt the clock
That syncopates our love.

  • Last seen on Feb 6 7:34 PM 2007. Member since December 8, 2004.
  • I'm a topaz horse poet for 12 comments.
  • I am a 16 year old girl (USA)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
  • Visit my homepage at n/a
  • I have 12 comments

My Poetry

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  • Pioupiou
    We're all so young
    So we'll break your heart
    12 lines, July 9, 2005. In Other
  • Petit Frere
    You've heard the songs of the broken hearted
    3 lines, July 2, 2005. In Other
  • Chanson D'Amour
    And May is so hard to get through
    Since you've left me behind
    21 lines, 1 comment, May 25, 2005. In Other
  • Ferme Tes Yeux
    Though the rain slips through my clothes and into my veins
    I can't take my eyes off of you
    15 lines, 2 comments, May 5, 2005. In Other

Guest Book

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  • iPoet on December 15, 2004
    Orange county. U? Hey cool names for ur work. Is it french?
  • iPoet on December 15, 2004
    Hi and Welcome to AP! I'm "D". Just wanted to say thanx for showing intrest in my group. I hope it'll turn out well. I hope you have a blast here with us at AP. I joined not to long ago myself and I'm hooked. Once again, welcome.
    (I'm frm Cali too.)

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