I thank you all for visiting my page! I have a new found love, her name is poetry. I am pleased with the way she treats me and others,. Sometimes her reality translates to other peoples reality. Though i've known her for a long time, we've only recently hooked up! Now we're inseparable! please come into our home, enjoy the lavish living arrangements. Sit down. Take off your shoes, relax, stay awhile! Tea is now brewing! Lights are dim to the pleasures of all. The mood now should be 'Cool Vibes'...Sade if you will! Wrap yourself up in my words and let them take you on a journey. hopefully at the end of this ride, you'll come back for more. Enjoy! Please feel free to leave suggestions and or comments!
- Last seen on Aug 26 4:31 PM. Member since April 26, 2007.
- I'm a moonstone path poet for 524 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is 'Sometimes smart, Always Wise!' or "Better them than me" or " If you don't first succeed, try and try again".
- I am a man from New York (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm I'm teaching the youth of New York City.
- I am in the groups Trance forming Artists, a creator of rhymes
- I have 524 comments
Poems I'm focused on
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I'm of the rotten persuasion
Half black, the other half brazen -
The Rebuttle...(I THINK not) however...
A rebuttle is only necessary if what they say is itching,(on the contrary)...63 lines, 10 comments, March 16. In Humor, Dark, Pain, Lyrics, Abuse, My own style, Death, Inspirational, Hate, Beat -
shhh, hear that?
listen carfully -
Blink once and dream thoughts
think out loud and your dreams are tossed -
These puny humans think they can think AsIThink with astronomical seeds?
i open up the laboratory to the soul's mind freeze23 lines, 8 comments, January 30. In Humor, Dark, Lyrics, Thoughts, Contemporary, Fantasy, Pain, Abstract, My own style -
Overrated and under appreciated
complicated with palms sedated -
as i step out of my steps what's left is shadowy footprints
inprints on life's door48 lines, 10 comments, January 13 -
There's a glitch in my tech
Sifting throught this itch i've revealed that painful twitch -
Only a small dosage of knowledge can be awarded
College for some seems moot -
under all the earth's surfaces
these stones are forever penetrable -
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longing chortle ending / an evening's calm softens / i'm exhausted / combustion trailing my sunlit will / i wonder, will this be it? / i found soles slanted /10 lines, 7 comments, July 10, 2007
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Explicit parts—my cradling / I am dancing beyond time / Such descent awakens dreams / And your lifeless tears found / A kiss was the desire placed on your heart / Let unknown healing be perfect / Unending whisper
My Poetry
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Ink drips from tool to pad
Wetness sets in like baby drool on dad -
This seemed quite funny to me to add as a poem. It really isn't, however it is my thoughts combined with my son's undieing quest for infor15 lines, 4 comments, August 10. In Humor, Nature, Hope, Life, My life, Lost in thought, Freewrite, Dedication, Children
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Humanities insanities
I can stand to be
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Sign of the Swine on January 17Thank you for the testimony. You know, reading your work has inspired me to try different styles and all that, and that poem I just wrote with you, I think it was some of my best writing because I was trying to keep up with your talent! All of your work is hella creative, you come up with topics that no one else does and your flow is brilliant. So you keep writing cause you have fire in your pen.
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Passionate Phoenix on August 28, 2007thank you for commenting on Hourglass, I'm really glad you liked it, I spent a week thinking of lines like that put add in..
thanks again
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Swangrnv on August 11, 2007Y R U Great?That's easy!U came from being in the presence of GREATNESS!!L.O.L. No seriously u continue to hone ur craft and express great ability to convey ur thoughts on paper(sort of speak)and it is very inspiring in what u say.And of course I'm not the least bit bias!(wink,wink!)
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AsIThink on August 9, 2007WiseWithWordz strikes again, huh? I like your stylez and flow. I'm feeling strong, positive vibes and I feel inspired by your work. I can't put my finger on your style probably because you switch up on me. Good stuff. I'm impressed by your energy/passion and instructive approach and it allows enough room for not feeling 'preached to' but is open to interpretation (no rigid). I'm sold. Thanks for your contributions.
