Really, there's not a lot to say. I could list my favourite bands, but... do you care? I could tell you all the things that I hate - again, what does it matter? Pretty much, anything that I've wanted to express is hidden in the links below (yes, they'd be my poor attempts at poetry). So - if you're reading this (does anyone read these?) I hope you didn't find it too painful. Gracias!
- Last seen on Nov 8 6:05 AM 2008. Member since November 15, 2005.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 220 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "I fly so high, only to fall so low".
- I am a 17 year old girl (Australia)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a lazy do-nothing... sometimes.
- Visit my homepage at non existant





- I have 220 comments, 1 contest, 82 poems, 1 story
Poems I'm focused on
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"None of that" you told me
but hissed would be a better word. -
A light, in the darkness of the cavern
In which time, for time, will dream. -
33 lines, 3 comments, April 23, 2006. In Dark
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Go on, execute me
A sacrifice to thee -
How the Earth knows who I am
I cannot even pretend to know -
Yet every time I think this
I know you will not approve -
I never gave it to you
But you convinced me that I did
My Poetry
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24 lines, February 22, 2008. In Society
My Stories
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482 lines, May 15, 2006. In <600 words
Guest Book
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lovelustre on August 16, 2006yes, i read these author's pages. i can't speak for others though! i only read about as much as you wrote, unless it really sparks my interest, then i read a little more. your motto is great!
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Winter Ice on July 30, 2006To me: Read through all 30/07.
Marble Angles pt II.
Consider doing a portrait.
Take a quote.
"Hairpins" -
xHeart-Shapedx on April 25, 2006Hi, thanks for commenting on my poem! It's one of my favourites that I've written, and I always try to look at things with a different perspective, hence- "Hell hath no fury..." Thanks again.
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satansdarkestdream on March 30, 2006ok i am glad that you decided to comment on my poem, ok first of all i am going to explain why i did what i did. ok first of all the typos or so called capital letters are all for a cause, i wrote this poem as if i was a younger boy writing it to me as i got older; to show that i do have a caring person or "thing" in my life. a child would not know how to do those things and i believe it gives the poem character. moving on, the line you said i should change, peddles so dark as to not be seen, or somthing l;ike that, close enough. well it was a metaphor to show the nlackness in my life, the peddles is what is shown on the outside, the black or darkness is barried inside the color of the peddals, when the black infects the peddals which allows noone to see me. as far as the commetn you can relate i am glad i hope you can. i do not mind critics but please try to look deeper before you pass judgment. now that you know the reasons why i did what i did, please re read it and see if knowledge makes a difference.
the black rose
david
