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`I could grab the stars down from the sky

And put them before your eyes

and still you wouldn't see how much I love you

I could stand time still

against everyone elses will

and you still wouldn't do what I need you to

My hands could crush all your worries

and make all your enemies scurry

But you still wouldn't see how low you make me feel

I could wrap my arms around you

Make the wind dry up the morning dew

But you still wouldn't see that I am real

~

Last seen on Nov 16 12:49 AM 2006. Member since December 1, 2005.
I'm a carnelian hope poet for 135 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "Feel your purpose, and live it.".
When I'm not writing, I'm a failure..
I have 135 comments, 5 poems

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Many Thanks

7 lines, 3 comments, December 12, 2005. In Personal
My Baby Love

acrostic for my dauughter

13 lines, 22 comments, December 6, 2005. In Personal, Love
"You'd Never Know"

19 lines, 3 comments, December 5, 2005. In Personal, Love
"Playful"

3 lines, 3 comments, December 1, 2005. In Haiku, Love

Guest Book

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GypsySmiles on December 25, 2005

I hope you have a very Merry Christmas Please give you little angel a from me
GypsySmiles on December 22, 2005

Just thought I would stop by and say hello and see how you were doing. Hope all is well with you and your family
Take Care and Always Smile
PaintedParisPassion on December 12, 2005

Thanks again for all the comments!!
kenny-streetcrazy on December 10, 2005

Thanks for commenting me (and my music tastes/eras). I cannot stand the music of today. MCR and FalloutBoy, they are not music. Country and Rap, they are also not music. The late fifties, sixties, seventies, eighties, and early nineties, now those were music, man. Anyways, you write magnifiscent and wonderful poetry. The emotion you that back it all up with are groovy and poetic.
Well, live on and live again, for death is only the beginning.
Cya.