Just, as a note to you of whom I might have insulted in some way: I say what I think. I do not like to apologize for speaking my mind. I like to nag and I am a fierce nitpick. Please try not to be terribly offended. Try not to be put off, for, if this sharpened tongue of mine has wounded your pride, you must find better armor.
Thank you to you who actually read that.
~WhyA
Thank you to you who actually read that.
~WhyA
- Member since September 16, 2003.
- I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 74 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "0".
- I am a girl (U.S)
- I have 74 comments, 9 poems, 2 stories
My Poetry
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i am nothing but a glass of milk to you20 lines, 3 comments, September 14, 2004. In Other
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give me something more substantial
than the scent of lilac and rose21 lines, September 12, 2004. In Other -
The Immortal will rise and fall as all things come and go, but this time, she left a note.
My Stories
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This Life
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Elusive Holes
by Whyagain
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Graveflower on January 6, 2004I just thought I'd tell you, I love your poetry! Great work. Cant wait to read more.
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rhiannon 11 on October 11, 2003Ani DiFranco is from Buffalo and I live an hour away. My mama is a DiFranco. Seems we are more than a bit related. Is that not cool? Thanks for stopping by my author page.
I will be back!
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Heartbroken on October 1, 2003lol, yay, i love the author page. huzzah! my forearm hurts. Bad times. But yea. Its getting late and i still needa read two chapters of lord of the flies. lol, yea, i procrastinate on homework. bleh, i hate school.
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Three very classy poems you have here.
What makes me wonder, though: why do you hate the second-person pronoun? Presumably you mean 'you'. I tell my students not to use it in academic essays, but in poetry??
After all, you use it in two of your postings, and I'm not sure what the problem is. 'If one can keep one's head when all about one are losing theirs and blaming it on one' doesn't have the same ring.....
