Waltz of Shadow

I've recently have just gotten back in the groove of writing; I decided to take a year off from writing and I deeply regert doing that. Other then that, I don't have much to say about myself.

Last seen on Apr 15 5:14 PM 2007. Member since October 26, 2003.
I'm a carnelian hope poet for 141 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "You can kill a man but you can't kill an idea.".
I am a 17 year old girl (United States)
When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
I have 141 comments, 20 poems, 1 story

My Poetry

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This is Me

When the dawn rose and the sun had shown,
I still lay bed, half awake half dead.

42 lines, June 16, 2006. In Personal, Hope
Danse Macabre

Twisted by truth, people seem to forget.
The witch tales had me hypnotize with rhyme.

26 lines, 2 comments, April 1, 2005. In Weird, Spiritual, Dark
Acceptance

My only acceptance is my own living death.
My soul is out of breath.

35 lines, 1 comment, March 24, 2005. In Weird, Personal, Dark
Death to Halloween

Someone send these people a Vigilante,
save them from Devil’s Night.

60 lines, 3 comments, October 31, 2004. In Weird, Spiritual, Dark

My Stories

Beggar

The snow drifted over the alley, covering all its secrets by the inches. Life, death, hunger, love, hate, mistakes, perfection all disappeared as the snow packed higher on the

582 lines, 1 comment, November 16, 2004. In <200 lines, Depression, Horror

Guest Book

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mrs jesse mccartney on March 26, 2005

thanks 4 the comment, i have all of my grandparents, 2 grandpas and 2 grandmas but i did lose a great grandma about 1/2 year ago and its not a tragedy but i did luv her but i dont like cry over it or nething.
Almost Romeo on March 26, 2005

HI RAVEN!
BlackWingedAngel on December 3, 2004

just throught i would come and say hi and how have you been if you can remember me
*Black*Wing
Hellcat on November 22, 2004

when i told you to try not to describe everything, what i meant by that was that trying to describe every aching detail of the moment (in a short story at least) could possibly distract a reader (such as myself) from the bigger picture you are trying to get across. your story was good, no doubt. and a lot of ppl will probably not have any problems with it. i hope you didn't get a negative feeling from my suggestion. but sometimes a little less means a little more. i hope this helps. great work on the story though. oh cool! oregon UNITE!!!!!!!!!!!! lol.