VisionMuse• Show poetry

My poetry style is one I like to compare to as a rhythme, sometimes its an off beat, other times its a mix of high and low tempo's with a time that is eratic but steady... with hooks to mix it up and give it a body of its own in structure....Sometimes if Im lazy and I just wanna put something up there..I can be repetitious in the tempo of the rhyme meaning its not reaching any highs or lows it just droans on...I try to avoid that...but It is what it is LOL....No reason * just Rhyme to keep time LOL.
Can u tell I play drums? LOL I am also a song writer that is what I focused on before I began to write poetry* When I found the boards I transposed alot of my songs into poems and went from there.

Im pretty brutal about my ethic in all of this....If it dont make me bleed its bunny!....Iv been pretty tame so far* But I hope you guys enjoy my work...its very personal to me...and ur comments are appreciated be it good or bad.....Just please if you make a comment please dont offer advise of how I spell or speak the words they are mispelled for a reason...its my way to connect to the reader in an informal way...My expression is captured more effectively in this......Some ppl can relate others cant and thats all good....But let me have my style...and I'll do the best i can with the rest for ya LOL

Leaf