Hello, Im Brittany. I just stumbled across this site thanks to a friend and decided to try it out. Let me know what you think of some of my poems, I really like to get constructive criticism, but I also like to know what people enjoyed about the things they have read. So dont be shy, if you read something let me know about what your thoughts are, whether its good, or not. 
Thanks!
My best frannn wrote this!
For Brittany
You make up,
where I lack.
You're the one
who makes me laugh
when I can't even smile.
You're the kindness
to my mean.
and, I'm the same to you.
You're the logic in my life, and
I'm the voice of reason in yours.
You know things I don't,
and I spell better than you.
You can cook,
I can bake.
We're always there to make each other laugh.
Even if it is at one another,
as you fall and I spaz.
Or, even if it's just an ugly cookie,
or a raptor,
or a dead fish,
or the weird faces I make.
I don't know what I'd do with out you,
I'd probably have given up by now.
You're my rock, and you don't even know it.
I'd wake up at night,
in my hospital bed,
and look over at you,
clonked out on the chair my dad stole from my old room,
see you, spending your weekends,
with me, in a hospital, there for me, even though I wake you up all the time, for odd reasons.
I know I didn't look all that good,
but, you didn't say anything of the sort.
Even when I had an I.V. in my neck,
because the veins in my arms kept collapsing.
And, so,
there you sit, on my floor, reading a book,
chewing on your finger nail,
twitching away.
You're my best friend,
thank you.
Thanks!My best frannn wrote this!
For Brittany
You make up,
where I lack.
You're the one
who makes me laugh
when I can't even smile.
You're the kindness
to my mean.
and, I'm the same to you.
You're the logic in my life, and
I'm the voice of reason in yours.
You know things I don't,
and I spell better than you.
You can cook,
I can bake.
We're always there to make each other laugh.
Even if it is at one another,
as you fall and I spaz.
Or, even if it's just an ugly cookie,
or a raptor,
or a dead fish,
or the weird faces I make.
I don't know what I'd do with out you,
I'd probably have given up by now.
You're my rock, and you don't even know it.
I'd wake up at night,
in my hospital bed,
and look over at you,
clonked out on the chair my dad stole from my old room,
see you, spending your weekends,
with me, in a hospital, there for me, even though I wake you up all the time, for odd reasons.
I know I didn't look all that good,
but, you didn't say anything of the sort.
Even when I had an I.V. in my neck,
because the veins in my arms kept collapsing.
And, so,
there you sit, on my floor, reading a book,
chewing on your finger nail,
twitching away.
You're my best friend,
thank you.
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, and quote is "Chipper! :D". - I am a 18 year old woman (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm Singing and studying psychology, my major..
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- I am in the groups Advice and more for teens, Alone and Broken, Bi Polars or any other Mental Illness, Classic Rock Poetry, Comments, Frustration With Society, I just want comments, Lovin The Blues, Luminous Consensus, People Who Can Not Spell, Poetry Circus, Random people, The Greenhouse, The Group Of Life, Used and Abused, XxAcidicBruisesAndShatteredSoulsxX, Young Mums and Young Mums to be, give and get comments, xXDarkxPoetsXx
- I have 214 comments, 2 contests, 1 column, 24 poems, 1 journal
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The earth shifts once more.
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Sickening, that is what this family is.
Absolutely vile and disgusting.56 lines, 1 comment, August 6 -
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- Column: Survivors of Sexual Assault and Rape. at allpoetry
I am a member of a Sexual Assault and Rape support site, and on there, they are doing a "Mural Project" for survivors. This will eventually be put together and shown not only online, but also at real live events. I think that is awesome, and being a survi
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So on september 3 I composed my first piano piece. Its very beautiful and is called "Jamie's Ballad". I love it and am soooo proud of me! I can barly read music as it is though, but I've been playin the piano allll my life XD. Well, I can read the music I wrote, but I bet anyone who can actually read music 100% would
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