My style of poetry is very laid back. I dont like to rhyme just because I can't do it to save my life. My poems are usually short sweet and to the point. Most of the poetry I write is about what I am feeling at the time, has actually happened or something I make up on the spot that really has no point. I dont like a lot of darkd stuff. There is too much of it around. well that is about it.
- Last seen on Apr 20 3:34 PM 2007. Member since September 6, 2005.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 242 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Your opinion is the only one that matters.".
- I am a 16 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Full time Student.
- I am in the groups a poets dream of love
- I have 242 comments, 2 addlines
My Poetry
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I am known as the girl who never does anything wrong.
The girl who care too much about her grades.19 lines, 3 comments, August 12, 2006. In Society -
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Sophmore year has been the hardest yet.
My so-called-friends37 lines, 2 comments, May 7, 2006. In Personal -
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ThedarknessIFeel on May 4, 2006Hey Cuz im so sry i dident get ur message until today and im at school right now so yeah y dident you call me retard! gosh well are u going to help with folk dancing this year i might ill call u some time much love byebye
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Unspeakable Tears on January 8, 2006thank you so much and your right, about everything. i do need a new name and i dont need to listen to all those crude people out there. i shouldnt have to worry about what other people are saying about me. i am glad you liked my poem. thank you for your wonderful advice. it is much appreciated. do you have any suggestions about my login name? if you do just write. i always have trouble coming up with something that shows something about me or something clever. so if you have any ideas that would be great. thanks again.
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Carole Dudley on January 7, 2006I think you need a new name. Poetically incorrect? I don't think so after reading your poem, "Whispers". It certainly highlights the grief we allo feel at the bad treatment by other people. It has made me almost a hermit, but for you, at 15, that is not the answer. You have to steel yourself to be immune to crude people who raise themselves up by acting superior to someone else. Just look down your nose at them, and tell yourself to ignore stupidity.
Keep writing. You are very good. And thanks for reading my poem, too! -
teeth like war on December 24, 2005I love your account name. Very clever.
