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Most of my work is dark and sad or depressing. it comes from personal experience or from friends who had experience. i like using metaphors and ironic situations. i also like confusing the reader and making them think, to where it doesnt really make sense until they think about for a while and start to understand. i dont really care if it rhymes or sounds good together, i write what i feel or think and that's all that matters. what's talented or special about poetry is that what a person feels or thinks is beautiful in it's own way! i always try to give encouraging comments and comments that make you feel overwhelmed with accomplishment-if i like your poetry that is. so if ya want some good feedback-let me know. but only if you return the favor and read my work as well.

  • Last seen on Apr 6 2:06 AM 2007. Member since August 12, 2004.
  • I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 77 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Before you judge me, take a look at yourself.".
  • I am a 21 year old girl (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a artist/poet/mother/wife/college student.
  • Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/lovingwife
  • I am in the groups Gothic Inc, all music group
  • I have 77 comments

My Poetry

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  • I speak these words, these words with no meaning-they mean everything to me...
    32 lines, 5 comments, September 28, 2005. In Dark
  • My mind is an open book
    for all to read.
    33 lines, 5 comments, September 20, 2004. In Dark
  • I feel nothing;
    A short period of pain,
    20 lines, 1 comment, September 20, 2004. In Dark
  • sweet tears on an inocent face.
    8 lines, 10 comments, August 17, 2004. In Dark

Guest Book

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  • The poet JR on September 2, 2006
    I have read all of your work to date and it is wonderfull
    very strong and with great vission
    JR
  • NEMesis-444- on December 8, 2005
    Hey, I've recently joined the group "Goths Only" and I noticed we share A LOT of the same ideas and views in most of the topics. I plan on reading your poetry whenever I've got some free time. I'm pretty sure I'll like it from what I've read the the group forum. You're the same age as me, that's kool, most of the people here are much younger or much older than I am. Even my girlfriend (Moey) is only 17, but I love her more than anything in the world and the world itself despite the age difference. Anyway, feel free to check out my page and my girlfriend's. My bio has pics and messenger addresses and all sorts of stuff.
  • Johnny Wheeler on August 19, 2004
    Hi,
    I just want to say thank you for reading and commenting on my writes, and for visiting my author page. I am honored that you liked my writes.
    --Johnny
  • Ayla YellowRose on August 17, 2004
    Hi! Just thought I'd say hello! My guy, Miseriaxcantare, really is impressed by your work! I don't doupt him either! I'll read up on this as soon as I'm done a stupid homework assignment that is completely mad.

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