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Ugly GirlShow poetry

ok, so for starters, im new at this. i have been writig for a few years, but i have never shown anyone anything that i wrote. as a result, i never edit my work either. most of it is unfinnished...i would really like some feedback. completely honest feedback. if my writing really sucks, i want you to tell me.

anyways, the most important things in the world to me, are my friends, my boyfriend, and music... i love music...my family has never really been there for me...

sone things that inspire my writing,are my boyfriend, and the fact that im a rape survivor...

My Poetry

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  • We are entirely smooth
    oh, and if you only knew
    11 lines, September 18, 2005. In Love, Hope
  • The silence is stripping me bare, and I have never been so cold
    Your words sting and tear, and I have never been so hurt
    13 lines, 1 comment, September 8, 2005. In Sad, Dark, Angst
  • a cloud of flies obscure the sun
    a stone is dropped
    29 lines, August 14, 2005. In Fantasy, Personal, Angst
  • promise me that on the last day of earth
    you will tell me all your secrets
    14 lines, 8 comments, July 26, 2005. In Personal, Love, Hope

Guest Book

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  • hottfrance420 on January 5, 2006
    wazz yp ugly
  • hottfrance420 on January 5, 2006
    wazz yp ugle
  • ykcul31-bwards on July 26, 2005
    yea alright, i welcome you too. your writing is very good! to think you kept it hidden all those years . oh well, at least ppl can read it now! cant wait to read more of your work.
    much love
    ~SAB.
  • Dove on July 13, 2005
    Hmmmmmmmmm
    I don't see a poem yet!!!

    I will check back on ya later
    See ya

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