"Where once well-oiled sunbathers drowse on padded lounge chairs, and prep themselves for Melanoma,
In the midst of a devastating war with their conscious,
Where the Poster Child struts his stuff on stage,
And one day learns to lie about his age,
Where the dead man lies broken on the edge of sanity,
Fighting off the ghosts that try to haunt his waking hours,
Where emaciated models saunter through sun bleached streets,
And starve themselves for fifteen minutes of fame,"
~Excerpt from my "Hotel California"
Well, I'm a writer to a fault. Not many people understand my poetry, and that's the way that it's meant to be. I don't give a hOOt about rhyming or about stanzas. Poetry is meant for feeling, NOT order. Order kills poetry. That being said, don't denounce or insult me or my poetry based on your stupid order.
Adieu
~Dessira'
In the midst of a devastating war with their conscious,
Where the Poster Child struts his stuff on stage,
And one day learns to lie about his age,
Where the dead man lies broken on the edge of sanity,
Fighting off the ghosts that try to haunt his waking hours,
Where emaciated models saunter through sun bleached streets,
And starve themselves for fifteen minutes of fame,"
~Excerpt from my "Hotel California"
Well, I'm a writer to a fault. Not many people understand my poetry, and that's the way that it's meant to be. I don't give a hOOt about rhyming or about stanzas. Poetry is meant for feeling, NOT order. Order kills poetry. That being said, don't denounce or insult me or my poetry based on your stupid order.
Adieu
~Dessira'
- Last seen on Nov 4 11:01 PM. Member since February 10, 2006.
- I'm a citrine experience poet for 163 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "We're allso intoxicatingly erotic in our denial".
- I am a 23 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a another mindless worker.
- Visit my homepage at ...home?
- I am in the groups Anti Bush and Other Political Stuff
- I have 163 comments, 2 contests
My Poetry
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Where once well-oiled sunbathers drowse on padded lounge chairs, and prep themselves for Melanoma,
In the midst of a devastating war with their conscious,31 lines, 1 comment, November 10, 2006. In Dark -
Writer's block...
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As the blood drips from my ears and stains the pavement,
Making little Rorschach tests, as if Mother Nature herself is trying to question my sanity, -
The dead man stumbles and once again lies face up in the gutter grumbling as he drowns in the rain.
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drown-in-my-sorrow on November 7, 2006Hi,
Thanks for the nice comment.. It was really nice. You have such a pretty background on your page too.
I love the movie Memoirs of a Geisha.. It's awesome! Ok.. lol..... thanks again. Your very talented.
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calvspw on August 23, 2006Well I said I'd leave a comment find me now oh daughter of mine??
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The Contest Bank on May 20, 2006since points were given 2 u...u r supposed to start the contest. Please respond.
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Lili Liaison on May 16, 2006Just stopping by to tell you AND your kitty that ,yes, you did indeed win. I thought you did the best and you were one of the only ones to do my titles option so yeah. I hope you'll enter any of my future contests. I'm really interested in reading more from you. See you around!
~*~Austyn~*~
