I'm 16 years of age and I've been writing poetry for only 3 months. Due to this, I would greatly appriciate critical responses which could help improve my writings. I feel my biggest problem is trying to be deep without being pretentious. Many thanks for you who review, and I'll do my best to review your work in turn.
"Trees are poems the earth wrote upon the sky. We tear them down to make paper that we may record our emptiness." -Gibran Khalil Gibran
"Trees are poems the earth wrote upon the sky. We tear them down to make paper that we may record our emptiness." -Gibran Khalil Gibran
- Last seen on Nov 12 11:27 PM. Member since October 11, 2006.
- I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 27 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Will you serve a purpose or purposely serve?".
- I am a 16 year old guy from Michigan (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a pianist.
- Visit my homepage at N/A
- I have 27 comments
My Poetry
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Blood boils cold,
in veins dusty and old,
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Amber Rose : My AP Name on February 9, 2007its Myriad now lol in honor of your little comment! lmao feel very very special. You could look at me changing it as me trying to run from who I am and what I have to deal with in my life... running from my own silent struggles. Or you could look at in the view of a somewhat normal person as me simply changing my name... lmao the choice is yours my friend... the choice is yours
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Amber Rose : Free Verse on February 3, 2007hey i just wrote my first free verse poem n it sux monkey balls! lol you are the master of free verse so when ya get a chance check it out k? thanx!
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Amber Rose : WELCOME BACK!!!!!! on February 3, 2007its great to have you back!!!! now i have something to do with my time pathetic i know but why not? lol btw you spelled poetry wrong in ur comment to me lmao jus lettin ya know! bye
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PoEtRyInMe on November 12, 2006HEY I KNOW YOU!!!! Your wicked HoTt! SEXY DAN!!!! WHOOT WHOOT! hey... could you turn around for me?.... now turn again please.... turn.... turn... turn... YEAH!
