I'M BETTER THAN YOU.
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If the poem you wrote means something to you, and you satisfied yourself with it and (most importantly) that's all you were trying to do when you wrote it, then fuck what I have to say.
I accept critical comments on all my work, whether it is marked "critical" or not. Feel free to rip me apart. You'll probably want to after I'm through with you.
Shout outs to Ronan, the Irish lad who's wise beyond his years, Zeke Thorne, who seems to be my biggest fan, and gossumo, my fellow indie-kid.
Disclaimers:
If the poem you wrote means something to you, and you satisfied yourself with it and (most importantly) that's all you were trying to do when you wrote it, then fuck what I have to say.
I accept critical comments on all my work, whether it is marked "critical" or not. Feel free to rip me apart. You'll probably want to after I'm through with you.
Shout outs to Ronan, the Irish lad who's wise beyond his years, Zeke Thorne, who seems to be my biggest fan, and gossumo, my fellow indie-kid.
- Last seen on Jul 29 7:16 PM 2008. Member since November 23, 2002.
- I'm a pyrite eye poet for 1,192 comments.
- I am a 19 year old guy (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a snot.
- Visit my homepage at www.15footstick.com/marks
- I have 1,192 comments, 4 contests, 116 poems, 10 stories
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So then what happened? Lemme see. Okay, well I just drove home Friday night kind of pissed at myself for giving in to her but also kind of not giving a shit. and man, in apathy3959 lines, 4 comments, March 29, 2006. In 200-1500 paragraphs
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Jeffery loved making faces in the mirror. He’s sit there for hours sometimes just making himself laugh with all the weird contortions he could conjure. He also liked talking to860 lines, 1 comment, March 28, 2006. In 600-2000 words, <200 paragraphs
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Todd Roswell on February 26, 2006You were one of the few people I could find on this site that seemed to actually care about writing poetry as opposed to babbling on about girlfriends and angst and wearing masks and wrist slitting, and I respected that. I must admit, however, that I have never understood any of your poems- I don't even really like them that much, but they seem to have required some thought, and that's more than I can say for about 90% of the poems on this site.
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DougMcCue on February 23, 2006dude i was reading abunch of my old shit and comments and what not and you read a lot of them and left hnest comments... thanks, marks (that was your name wasn't it)...
yeah i am rarly satisfied with my own poetry but i write because thats what i do...
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CinSoBella on February 22, 2006wow. u fucking hate poetry...
MORE POWER TO YOU!!!! lmao
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ego mind trip on December 26, 2005thanks for the comment on the name
