life is not about CHARADES, shiny lights pouring down on parades. there is more to this than just earning the grade -- but no one knows it (shows it?) i'm afraid.
- Last seen on Dec 4 8:57 AM 2008. Member since January 16, 2004.
- I'm a opaline dream poet for 967 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is ""Pearl Avenue ran past the high school lot"".
- I am a 18 year old man (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a n inspired student.
- Visit my homepage at www.xanga.com/tjoonz
- I have 967 comments, 2 contests, 2 addlines, 110 poems, 5 stories
My Poetry
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5:49 and still the prick of sleep evades
This sad mockery of a poet.34 lines, August 17, 2007 -
Playing feelings like they’re dice,
Show mine promise no stability.24 lines, 1 comment, March 18, 2007 -
I can just put my hands up over your eyes,
Then look at all that stirs inside39 lines, 5 comments, March 5, 2007
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What was he doing!? I was so embarrassed.
"Get up, someone will see you!" He was on his knees in the most prestigious restaurant in Manhattan.798 lines, 2 comments, December 12, 2004. In <200 lines, Humor -
What was he doing!? I was so embarrassed.
"Get up, someone will see you!" He was on his knees in the most prestigious restaurant in Manhattan. -
“Come on, Come on, Move it!”
I could see the conflagration towering behind me, racing with the bellow of a tsunami. The jumbled cries and shouts were lost in the rolli430 lines, 2 comments, November 22, 2004. In <200 lines, Science fiction
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TinkyTheGreat on February 15, 2006Dear Lord. I think it's been at LEAST half a year since I last logged into Allpoetry. Well, Honestly, in reply to your comment from December, I have never heard of such a story.
I'm still active on Xanga and deviantart. www.xanga.com/tinkythegreat and www.tinkythegreat.deviantart.com -
TinkyTheGreat on June 27, 2005I have found you...at last.
And I guess you still write poetry. I guess I stopped. I don't feel like pinning up my emotions into a pretty little bottle or box for people to annalize and say "Ohhh, that's pretty!" and all that bull that they tell every other peom that even seems REMOTELY worth reading.
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MySecretDeath on June 19, 2005Thanks for the comments on the poems. As for Sadistic Comfort...that was more about a friend than me.
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kay1719 on February 3, 2005I re-read my poem "Broken Angel", and no it doesnt make me dizzy, and yes there were a few mistakes. But they are fixed, but thanks for your opinion.
Edited on Feb 03, 9:15 p.m. because ''.
