Yo :]
i ain't got much to say but i REEEALLY appreciate critical comments made towards my poems, as they're for my college english lit course :]
basic stuff would be i live in London, I'm 17 and BLA BLAAA its nothing really just read my shit and let me know what can we done to improve or even if you have any entrapment ideas to suggesttttt
thank you honeybuns.
i ain't got much to say but i REEEALLY appreciate critical comments made towards my poems, as they're for my college english lit course :]
basic stuff would be i live in London, I'm 17 and BLA BLAAA its nothing really just read my shit and let me know what can we done to improve or even if you have any entrapment ideas to suggesttttt
thank you honeybuns.
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- I am a 17 year old girl (Great Britain)
- When I'm not writing, I'm being me.
- I have 6 comments, 5 poems, 2 stories
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There’s a struggle for food over starvation in Zimbabwe
While we drown in beer on Martin Luther Kings Day
He said I have a dream that day
My Stories
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Worry is painted on my face, I have black stones for eyes, I do not know whether I breathe. I am slowly thinking of the worst Emily. Write2144 lines, February 7. In 2000-5000 words, Blood, Country, Death, Letter, Love, Russia revolution, War, Winter, Wolves
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I could tell from his voice he was trying to calm himself. “Juned it doesn’t ma-” he cut me off. “Is he there?” he asked again firmly. “Yes1993 lines, February 1. In 600-2000 words, Community, Depression, Family, Forced marriage, Love, Marriage, Religion, Romance
