I really appreciate feedback and comments on my poetry.
Also would like honest opinions on my work good or bad.
I am not bothered as long as it's honest.
I will always have a go at new poetry or something
that sparks my imagination.
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I have just started writing a lot of "Dark Poetry and Story's, which I have found to be interesting to write. I would just like to point out that these are all made up. And should be treated as fictional... HAHAHAHAHAHA!
All the best,
~T.S~
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Also would like honest opinions on my work good or bad.
I am not bothered as long as it's honest.
I will always have a go at new poetry or something
that sparks my imagination.
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I have just started writing a lot of "Dark Poetry and Story's, which I have found to be interesting to write. I would just like to point out that these are all made up. And should be treated as fictional... HAHAHAHAHAHA!
All the best,
~T.S~
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---|||---|||--- Died of
---|||---|||--- Cancer,
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-----\\///----- Post this
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- Last seen on Nov 14 5:31 AM. Member since September 12, 2007.
- I'm a tigereye texture poet for 1,297 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Your pen is your sword, use it wisely my friends".
- I am a man (Great Britain)
- When I'm not writing, I'm watching Football or having a scary dream!.
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- I have 1,297 comments, 2 contests, 242 poems
Poems I'm focused on
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The night is behind me
the morning has come.17 lines, 5 comments, February 11. In Contest -
Your name's in the papers
you're up to your tricks37 lines, 3 comments, January 14. In Lyrics -
The heavens cracked and down she fell
Holding just truth inside her shell -
Behind the curtains on privy street
where the lights turned red -
I sucked in the vapors
from the chalice of lies19 lines, 6 comments, October 15, 2008 -
Me Myself and his mate
always met down the pub33 lines, 7 comments, October 3, 2008 -
They still come for me
after all these years32 lines, 4 comments, July 16, 2008. In Dark -
You pinched my numbness
when I tried to climb up.17 lines, 23 comments, April 3, 2008. In Contest -
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When the lights go out and all is dark,
you only hear the beating of your heart. -
I wandered lonely streets
in search of blood divine -
One lonely child walked heavens path,
but was soon confronted, by the dark. -
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(Verse 1)
Goodbye, Goodbye -
My Poetry
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No way man... you can keep your roman's
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Guess we've been fooled, guess we've been lied to
whats there excuse, exploiting more blind fools20 lines, 1 comment, April 1
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Pamela A Lamppa : Merry Merry My Friend on December 20, 2008
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Georgia La Mariposa on October 28, 2008Hey, if you get a chance will you please read my new write? http://allpoetry.com/poem/4722851 much appreciated xx
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completely mad on February 7, 2008just saying hey,....haven't heard from ya in a while...I have a contest out you should come and check it out...i would be honored for your entry...
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playin with scissor : wow koo stuf on January 15, 2008great page and even better poetry i also write horror but mine is more psychological its very hard to understand with out knowing pain but any way koo page
