Hey everyone!!!
I hope you enjoy my poetry, I sure do enjoy writing it. I also LOVE this site, it is really well constructed and the people are very supportive. Each poem that I write is unique. They are very different to each other, so don't stop reaading after one if you find one that rubs you the wrong way. I believe in supporting all people who support me, but I will also give a critical comment with every critique I give, so don't take it personally if I make a suggestion!
This is a photo of me before my Yr 12 ball. The suit is called Matrix, so I hope you can tell how long the coat is. That was so much fun...
Anyways:
I strongly believe in equality, in all senses of the word. I think that every person would come out to be exactly the same if all of their talents were totalled. You are the best person at being you. If you aren't yourself, then who are you? This is quite idealistic, but I believe it to be true. Even if someone is better than you at poetry/sports/cooking/etc you are most probably better than them at something else. All competition is just for people to learn more about what they love, and all talents are meant for sharing.
I'd just like to make a personal distinction to all you webcrawlers. I have been a Christian all my life, and I am very grateful for my gift of poetry. If you want to ask me anything about anything, just send me a message. I'm in year 12 (very difficult in Australia), so it might take me some time to respond, but I will sometime.
Because all of my poetry is very different, I would like to inform you of my lists. I have laid out my poetry into different categories depending on the subject matter. If you know you enjoy a certain subject matter, go ahead and have a look at that collection! Also, I will post my contest placing poems here, so you know which poems people seem to enjoy:
"Mother Nature Denatured".............Gold
"West: My Past and Future"............Silver
"Veiled Being"...........................Silver
"Eden"....................................Silver
"Gilded Dragon".........................Silver
Well that's all for now, spread the love, spread the words, spread the poetry!
I hope you enjoy my poetry, I sure do enjoy writing it. I also LOVE this site, it is really well constructed and the people are very supportive. Each poem that I write is unique. They are very different to each other, so don't stop reaading after one if you find one that rubs you the wrong way. I believe in supporting all people who support me, but I will also give a critical comment with every critique I give, so don't take it personally if I make a suggestion!
This is a photo of me before my Yr 12 ball. The suit is called Matrix, so I hope you can tell how long the coat is. That was so much fun...
Anyways:I strongly believe in equality, in all senses of the word. I think that every person would come out to be exactly the same if all of their talents were totalled. You are the best person at being you. If you aren't yourself, then who are you? This is quite idealistic, but I believe it to be true. Even if someone is better than you at poetry/sports/cooking/etc you are most probably better than them at something else. All competition is just for people to learn more about what they love, and all talents are meant for sharing.
I'd just like to make a personal distinction to all you webcrawlers. I have been a Christian all my life, and I am very grateful for my gift of poetry. If you want to ask me anything about anything, just send me a message. I'm in year 12 (very difficult in Australia), so it might take me some time to respond, but I will sometime.
Because all of my poetry is very different, I would like to inform you of my lists. I have laid out my poetry into different categories depending on the subject matter. If you know you enjoy a certain subject matter, go ahead and have a look at that collection! Also, I will post my contest placing poems here, so you know which poems people seem to enjoy:
"Mother Nature Denatured".............Gold
"West: My Past and Future"............Silver
"Veiled Being"...........................Silver
"Eden"....................................Silver
"Gilded Dragon".........................Silver
Well that's all for now, spread the love, spread the words, spread the poetry!
- Last seen on Nov 3 9:39 AM. Member since May 24, 2006.
- I'm a obsidian idea poet for 670 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is ""Abstruse? Why, I'm not even esoteric!"".
- I am a 17 year old guy (Australia)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.





- I am in the groups Winklings
- I have 670 comments, 1 contest, 1 column, 61 poems
My Poetry
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So since I have cheated,
I stand on Grief's Rock. -
Clad in black, with golden hair,
There sits a pair of two. -
Upon mount of frozen time
all is white with snow.
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blackday on August 22, 2006Holla.
I haven't talked to you in a while.
Nice face up there.
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Rae the MoonShine on August 21, 2006Hi there...
Thanks for responding to me. I've been kind of avoiding the page for a while. Life has been tough, and I'm tempted to delete this page; however, a friend of mine told me I should join... so I'm still here. I might post a new poem sometime soon, but I just wanted to thank you a lot for the welcome you sent me. I really appreciate that.
-Rae -
Thundercat on July 1, 2006Thanks, I work out
not really, but I thought it was funny.
(hides in corner, all alone, with no one to talk to)
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Angel Full Of Hurt on July 1, 2006wow, you're STUNNING!
