I used to stick to the Couplets of 8 and 6 beats, I don't know why, it just came out of my mind that way. Now I experiment a little more. I try to comment on a lot of poems and give good insightful advice, even if I focus on something that may not exactly be the Author's intent. I like to write so that the reader develops their own interpretation, but within the parameters the poem sets. I love critique, in fact I enjoy put downs versus praises so long as there is reason behind them, so be as harsh as you can.
- Last seen on Oct 1 6:59 PM. Member since January 8, 2006.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 131 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is DAMNIT!.
- I am a 19 year old guy (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Student.
- Visit my homepage at www.xanga.com/live_for_the_ocean
- I am in the groups A How to Give Constructive Criticism Group
- I have 131 comments
My Poetry
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Well, kinda...49 lines, 8 comments, July 17
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Wake up early, stretch out slow. Tell yourself you have to go.52 lines, 3 comments, April 21
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Follow the clues.
That's what the graffiti on the bathroom stall said.21 lines, 8 comments, March 5
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pyrokirby44us on September 15, 2007your motto is damn it?
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carpediem001 on August 28, 2007wow. i heard about you getting a part in your school play. how freakin awesome. im not suprised though.
