Thebigreveal

• Member since January 17, 2006.
• I'm a carnelian hope poet for 109 comments.
• My mood is , and quote is "Would you like to forget!".
• Visit my homepage at myspace.com/jayfool
• I have 109 comments, 7 poems, 2 stories

My Poetry

• Spun out of Control

  I’ve had my eyes on you
  But You just see right through

  30 lines, 3 comments, February 15, 2006. In Lyrics, Personal, Love
• Dream Love <3

  You offer a hand to me
  I can’t be help but not sure

  39 lines, 3 comments, January 20, 2006. In Personal, Love, Hope
• Half Dead

  Half Dead
  I know you can see it in my eyes

  26 lines, 1 comment, January 19, 2006. In Sad, Lyrics, Personal
• Get Away

  Everything so twisted in me
  I just can't breathe at all

  20 lines, 3 comments, January 19, 2006. In Sad, Lyrics, Personal

My Stories

• And then she walked away

  She sat there all alone

  291 lines, 2 comments, May 7, 2006. In <600 words, Romance, Starting idea
• If this is giving ......I'm giving up

  He came home after a long day at work
  Called out a empty hello

  207 lines, 16 comments, March 26, 2006. In <200 lines, Romance, Unedited

Guest Book

• Unheard-Darkness on February 25, 2006

  THANX FOR THE COMMENT!!!!LIKE YOUR STORY 2 BUT I'M NOT VERY GOOD AT COMMENTS!!!!

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