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My name is Bryan Gray, I'm 19, devilishly handsome, and I'm from Scotland. My friend afullmetalwar let me read some of his poetry and it moved me, so I decided to give it a go. I don't know if I'm any good but maybe if I write stuff, I'll discover my hidden talent lol.

I've never written any poetry before so I would appreciate any constructive critisism that could help me improve.

As you might already know, my current poems are mostly all 5-line sets (I'm not sure if this is the proper term) and I find this very satisfying to write, especially if I manage to get three words a line.

Don't ask me why, I'm just a weird guy, I suppose.

Thanks for listening and I hope you enjoy my poems. If you do please drop me a comment and let me know what you liked.

  • Last seen on Sep 21 9:24 AM. Member since October 23, 2008.
  • I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 66 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "How you doin'?".
  • I am a 19 year old guy (Great Britain)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm reading.
  • I am in the groups A Critical Circle
  • I have 66 comments, 7 poems

My Poetry

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  • Scream For Me
    I grab you by the throat, my face hard as stone, as cold as ice,
    as I whisper in your ear, "Scream for me, bitch."
    31 lines, 2 comments, April 9. In Abuse, Dark, Pain, Rage
  • Monster
    But now, I don't want to, I want set it free and watch the fun.
    Does this make me evil, for wishing pain and death on others?
    7 lines, 3 comments, October 31, 2008. In Dark, Angst
  • Thunder
    The sky trembles, the mountains exhale
    In anticipation of beautiful violence.
    12 lines, 13 comments, October 24, 2008. In Nature
  • Immortal
    As I grab,
    my gilded pen.
    35 lines, 3 comments, October 24, 2008. In Life, Personal, Thoughts, Spiritual

Guest Book

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  • afullmetalwar : ... on March 22
    'ello man, what's going on?
  • Loves HER Master on October 25, 2008
    OMG! i love your picture!! Kakashi Hatake!! yay!
    feel free to message me if you ever want to chat.
  • afullmetalwar : … on October 24, 2008
    So quickly you have grown to this site.
    a lot faster then me,
    like i said before, any questions just ask
  • x-Valiant-x on October 23, 2008
    ello, your a friend of wars .... he is wonderful.. i'll go read your poetry now, thanks for reading mine.

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