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a little about me...my name's dan, i'm 22, and i go to cal st. fullerton. i've been writing since i was 16, and it used to be something i did to 'get my feelings out' but in the last couple of years i've made more of an effort to write well and be original rather than just translating anger or sadness or whatever to paper. also i'm not nearly as emotional as i used to be, and that reflects in my writing. i'm trying to be a man and maintain a certain sense of ambivalance without completely giving myself over to nihilism/apathy. i also like sports. anything else you want to know, ask, i guess.

  • Last seen 1 day ago. Member since January 6, 2002.
  • I'm a malachite opening poet for 412 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "jesus is coming. spit or swallow?".
  • I am a 22 year old guy (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a student and a server..
  • I have 412 comments, 3 contests, 73 poems

My Poetry

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  • I listen to the whispering wind, / It shines bright in my eyes as I breathe. / "I inhale and exhale my pupils." / The neckbeards around me
    8 lines, 4 comments, June 27, 2007. In Other
  • i have no name, no face, no identity.
    i am ishmail's axe and i shatter serenity.
    18 lines, April 19, 2007. In Other
  • an inescapable void,
    the words won't leave my eyelids.
    26 lines, March 14, 2007
  • your blood still hangs heavy in this vessel.
    anonymous venom coursing through me.
    27 lines, 1 comment, March 14, 2007

Guest Book

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  • SugarCandyKittyKat on March 17, 2007
    Hello

    Im the "still" poet remember me....

    U da greatest!!!!
  • eveningthought on November 1, 2006
    I've read alot of your poems and I must say you really good! Really great emotional poems. Keep up the good work.
  • anonymoushippie on March 24, 2005
    yes, i do remember you. where were you/how is it to be back in (rainy)ca?
  • tutaboy on March 23, 2005
    good stuff

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