I am here to post sections of the book I am writing as the rough drafts are completed. My fiancee has been trying to get me to sign up to post a few of the poems I have written her, as simple as they are she enjoys them and I want to make her happy by posting them.
When reading my poetry please keep in mind that I am rather new to writing and will not write expertly or perfectly, constructive criticism is appreciated... if you choose to read, I will return the favor of a comment and thank you for reading!
My fiancee: Concrete Angel; She has been a member of this site for 8 years now and is a wonderful poetess with talent abounds. And she is a terrific artist, I tell her that all the time but through it all she still doubts herself. She is beautiful in every way possible in my eyes.
Enjoy my book as I slowly post it, and feel free to leave honest construcvite critiques!
When reading my poetry please keep in mind that I am rather new to writing and will not write expertly or perfectly, constructive criticism is appreciated... if you choose to read, I will return the favor of a comment and thank you for reading!
My fiancee: Concrete Angel; She has been a member of this site for 8 years now and is a wonderful poetess with talent abounds. And she is a terrific artist, I tell her that all the time but through it all she still doubts herself. She is beautiful in every way possible in my eyes.
Enjoy my book as I slowly post it, and feel free to leave honest construcvite critiques!
- Last seen 2 days ago. Member since July 7.
- I'm a peridot parrot poet for 41 comments.
- I am a 30 year old man from Missouri (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm i'm doing martial arts, painting,and reading.

- I am in the groups Maniacally Macabre
- I have 41 comments, 1 contest, 7 poems, 1 story
My Poetry
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He would sit in a corner of the poorly lit bar;
Night after night observing the patrons -
Chocolates go stale, Flowers will fall.
And even this item, can’t say it all.
My Stories
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In 2040 the World Gov. decides during the Annual World Technology,Energy and Defence con.(T.E.D)
Guest Book
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Concrete Angel on November 9

WHAT?! Wasn't ME!
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UnicornSparkleVomit on July 10HEY YOU! Its Annie. Duh. So you know my name yes will change sometimes but im thinking about changeing it to either MicoLupus or BoyTrapBabyDoll...not sure yet. Anyway. It probably posted your story as a poem because you didnt go to www.storywrite.com its the 'sister site' to AP. All you have to do is log in with your AP account info. Then post the story and it will show up here under 'My Stories'. See ya.
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Concrete Angel on July 10Hi babe it's me! I don't know why it posted your story as a poem!
