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TheFlawedOneShow poetry

From this day and forward I shall say whatever I damn well please. I am of an age as to where I am allowed an opinion and I'm allowed to say it. If I want to use the word "fuck" in a poem I shall and I will do so with ease. I will not, however, critique poems in a crass way but will be honest with you. I expect the same from you. If you can't handle it then don't read me please. From this day forward my decree is I give myself permission to write whatever I want in whatever form I want. I may rhyme, I may misSPELL. I May WrIte LiKe ThiS but probably not since it makes me insane. I will share my truths and my lies and it's up to you to decide if you like it or not. That is my decree.



This is my current favorite song.



I could make a dress

A robe fit for a prince

I could clothe a continent

But i can't sew a stitch



I can paint my face

And stand very very still

Its not very practical

But it still pays the bills



I can't change my name

But i could be your type

I can dance and win at games

Like backgammon and life



I used to be the smart one

Sharp as a tack

Funny how that skipping years ahead

Has held me back



I used to be the bright one

Top in my class

Funny what they give you when you

Just learn how to ask



I can write a song

But i cant sing in key

I can play piano

But i never learned to read



I can't trap a mouse

But i can pet a cat

No i'm really serious!

I'm really very good at that



I can't fix a car

But i can fix a flat

I could fix alot of things

But i'd rather not get into that



I used to be the bright one

Smart as a whip

Funny how you slip so far when

Teachers dont keep track of it



I used to be the tight one

The perfect fit

Funny how those compliments can

Make you feel so full of it



I can shuffle cut and deal

But i can't draw a hand

I can't draw a lot of things

I hope you understand

I'm not exceptionally shy

But i've never had a man

That i could look straight in the eye

And tell my secret plans



I can take a vow

And i can wear a ring

And i can make you promises but

They won't mean a thing



Can't you do it for me, i'll pay you well

Fuck i'll pay you anything if you could end this



Can't you just fix it for me, it's gone berserk...

Fuck i'll give you anything if

You can make the damn thing work



Can't you just fix it for me, ill pay you well,

Fuck ill pay you anything

If you can end this

Hello, i love you will you tell me your name?

Hello, i'm good for nothing - will you love me just the same?



~Dresden Dolls~

~BRIGHT EYES LYRICS~

"When The President Talks To God"

When the president talks to God
Are the conversations brief or long?
Does he ask to rape our women’s' rights
And send poor farm kids off to die?
Does God suggest an oil hike
When the president talks to God?

When the president talks to God
Are the consonants all hard or soft?
Is he resolute all down the line?
Is every issue black or white?
Does what God say ever change his mind
When the president talks to God?

When the president talks to God
Does he fake that drawl or merely nod?
Agree which convicts should be killed?
Where prisons should be built and filled?
Which voter fraud must be concealed
When the president talks to God?

When the president talks to God
I wonder which one plays the better cop
We should find some jobs. the ghetto's broke
No, they're lazy, George, I say we don't
Just give 'em more liquor stores and dirty coke
That's what God recommends

When the president talks to God
Do they drink near beer and go play golf
While they pick which countries to invade
Which Muslim souls still can be saved?
I guess god just calls a spade a spade
When the president talks to God

When the president talks to God
Does he ever think that maybe he's not?
That that voice is just inside his head
When he kneels next to the presidential bed
Does he ever smell his own bullshit
When the president talks to God?

I doubt it

I doubt it

  • Last seen on Jul 13 5:03 PM. Member since September 13, 2006.
  • I'm a onyx dragon poet for 695 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "You be quiet, I'll be right.".
  • I am a woman (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a spicy piece of cheese.
  • I have 695 comments, 1 contest, 64 poems

Poems I'm focused on

  • It’s hard to find beauty in Auschwitz. There is plenty of fear, pain, and hunger. But there is beauty. It’s in the face of family members who found each other after thinking the other was dead. There’s joy in a child’s fa
    61 lines, 2 comments, June 25. In Contemporary, Sad, Society
  • Candy Cane kisses
    Peppermint dreams
    43 lines, 5 comments, March 9, 2007
  • She wanted the taste of enchantment
      on her lips since the day she was born.
    23 lines, 3 comments, February 27, 2007. In Contemporary

My Poetry

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  • I can't pretend I understand / How you can be so mean / And then try to take my hand / As if my feelings are unseen. / I can't tell you a lie / It hurts when you don't see / I am hurt and starting to c
    29 lines, May 18, 2007. In Sad
  • i am envious of you / your memories, your poetry / your false beauty / and putrid pity. / plain and simple / i adored you but alas- / i was one of many / just a grain of sand. / i blew in the
    64 lines, 5 comments, May 17, 2007. In Sad
  • i too, remain / in the misty colored / ashtrays of life. / i am certain / i once was more / than you ever dreamt. / i was lost at one time / but then again / weren't we all. / it's a
    46 lines, 4 comments, May 16, 2007

Guest Book

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  • Rose Angel : An added Thank you Dear................... on April 30, 2007
    Loved how you know that lake and sunset!Wow...amazing..but even more when you said my words out did the sunset...To an artist and poet it is a compliment...Thanks Darling!
  • Rose Angel : Dear CarpeDiemmSurrealus: You have made my day/! on April 30, 2007
    The words started flowing as they do sometimes,and there I had it...Prose..But my heart was in it...All the difference...Keep doing what you believe in and we will enjoy you...Happiness and Smiles.and a Bouquet of Thank you!..Rosemary
  • OOMAZZOo on October 24, 2006
    Hi, thanks for your comment on my write , I have one that may help you in your current mind state, it's called 'moments", it's up for publication and I think you'll like the message, check it out sometime. Keep yur head up!
    oOMAZZOo
  • TheFlawedOne on October 23, 2006
    Hello Suzi,
    Thank you so much for that beautiful message, I wanted to let you know I did read it but it was over the weekend and my husband was home and I like to keep this side of me private and just for me.
    I'm so glad that you are so strong and are able to over come all you obsticals [I doubt that's spelled correctly] and become an ever evoluving [probably spelled wrong too] person. That's a hard thing to do in life. Moving forward is so much harder than sitting still and just dealing.
    I am so honored [truly] that you consider me your friend. I only have one other lady that I speak to as a friend as I am too very cautious as well. Sure, I have people here and there that I talk to but not about my 'real' life.
    Have a juicy and dreamy day!
    ~*PointLessOne*~
    PS You are so appricated! And a lovely soul.

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