I've been writting for the better part of eight years now. I'm dumbfounded that so much of america's youth (yes, i know it's supposed to be capital) is so distant from literature now. If you enjoy my poetry, please, tell me. If you hate it or have any comments about it, TELL ME! I', 19, and need some criticisms for my writtings.
- Last seen 1 day ago. Member since March 17, 2006.
- I'm a peridot parrot poet for 34 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is ""I'd like to photograph your hand. And shake it for a while." -Flogging Molly".
- I am a guy (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm Father of JACOB ^_^.
- I have 34 comments, 58 poems
My Poetry
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I recall every moment we spent off the clock at school.
Or the twisting of my guts before I asked you to be mine.16 lines, December 3 -
What is the truth? What is the lie?
Does that "other person" really want to die?20 lines, December 3 -
I see you crying louder than the screaming alarm clock on your night stand.
So impossible to mention that I'm still in love with you.36 lines, 1 comment, November 23 -
Broken up so many times, I thought the pieces would be sand by now.
And we've been hurt so many Goddamn times, I thought our nerves would have quit and walked away.14 lines, November 13
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xmylastglimpsx on October 27, 2006There are more than twenty angels in this world, ten are peacefully sleeoing on clouds,nine are playing and one is reading at this moment.Send this to ten of your friends including me. If you get more than five replies someone who loves you will surprise you. Happy days! Do not break this ...it is working.. ~
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quill skill on July 12, 2006HULLOOOOO YAB YEW U MEANY!!!
HEHEHE YAB YEW SOOOO MUCHLY!
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quill skill on June 3, 2006hey...long time no talk...how are u???
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Suberu14 on April 8, 2006yo bill!!! MEOW
