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The-ChokeShow poetry

I'm a college student who really enjoys writing. It has been one of my interests for years and it helps me to think. I'm working on lots of different things and I always appreciate people's opinions and thoughts on what I write. If you have time leave me a comment or message so that I can hear what you think, and hopefully get better at what I do.

Sometimes I don't do a very good job of describing or introducing my poems, which make them less accessible than they should be. I'm trying to work on that as I continue writing, and if you have any questions about anything, please do ask.
*All of my poems are written around the time that they are posted unless otherwise stated in my notes.*

  • Last seen 10 hours ago. Member since October 9, 2007.
  • I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 63 comments.
  • I am a 19 year old guy from Pennsylvania (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
  • I am in the groups find some conversation
  • I have 63 comments

Poems I'm focused on

  • I'm no longer interested anymore in being laid bare
    I'd rather remain in this hole of arrogance
    16 lines, 2 comments, October 28
  • My lungs are filled so full with water
    It looks like it's all up to my heart
    35 lines, 3 comments, March 16
  • I gave you a hazard
    It turns out that I'm the one who would choke
    18 lines, 4 comments, December 30, 2007
  • Their flames and light appeared all around me Surrounding my insides
    11 lines, December 28, 2007

My Poetry

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  • Calling Lost Angels on September 12
    here's the link 2 my response: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4592359
  • hey choke. im a high school girl who has been writing since 3rd grade. Im just trying 2 make some new friends. im presently working on my sixth poetry book. i hope u will enjoy my stuff the way i enjoyed yours.
  • Everyones Dead on December 27, 2007
    Your guestbook is empty. Well, not anymore. Keep writing.

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