I love writing and I love reading other people's poetry. I've found that it's one of the best ways for me to express all of the things that I see around me or to describe all of the things I'm feeling and thinking about. A lot of the time I'm pretty vague, but other times my stuff can be pretty personal and hard to understand.
I love it when people read my stuff and offer their opinions. It helps me to get a feel for how I'm doing and improve things for the next time I write something. So if you have the time and can tolerate my stuff, I'd appreciate it if you could tell me what you think.
O and just so you know; considering how hopeless some of my poems may sound or come across, I am not hopeless at all. I am a Christian and I have my full faith and trust in my savior. However that doesn't mean that I don't have my fair share of problems. The majority of my poems stem from personal experience on some level, but they are not always meant to be taken literally. So I would just recommend that you read my stuff with an open mind. I guess that probably makes this all seem way more serious than it really is, but I know that sometimes the things I write can make some people concerned. Regardless, thanks for reading!
"They sold the old house
Boarded up the rooms just the way you wanted
They took your possessions
Gave them all away with the ghosts
You sing like the wind in the trees at night
You think I'm asleep but I'm awake for it
You think you can hide so easily
That no one ever hears you"
-Thursday
I love it when people read my stuff and offer their opinions. It helps me to get a feel for how I'm doing and improve things for the next time I write something. So if you have the time and can tolerate my stuff, I'd appreciate it if you could tell me what you think.
O and just so you know; considering how hopeless some of my poems may sound or come across, I am not hopeless at all. I am a Christian and I have my full faith and trust in my savior. However that doesn't mean that I don't have my fair share of problems. The majority of my poems stem from personal experience on some level, but they are not always meant to be taken literally. So I would just recommend that you read my stuff with an open mind. I guess that probably makes this all seem way more serious than it really is, but I know that sometimes the things I write can make some people concerned. Regardless, thanks for reading!
"They sold the old house
Boarded up the rooms just the way you wanted
They took your possessions
Gave them all away with the ghosts
You sing like the wind in the trees at night
You think I'm asleep but I'm awake for it
You think you can hide so easily
That no one ever hears you"
-Thursday
- Last seen 2 days ago. Member since October 9, 2007.
- I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 83 comments.
- My mood is
, and quote is "I wish I wasn't so uninspired". - I am a 20 year old guy from Pennsylvania (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm going to college and having a good time.
- I have 83 comments, 66 poems
Poems I'm focused on
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The night is young
But this monster is staying in tonight28 lines, July 1 -
My lungs are filled so full with water
It looks like now it's all up to my heart36 lines, 4 comments, March 16, 2008 -
I gave you a hazard
It turns out that I'm the one who would choke18 lines, 6 comments, December 30, 2007
My Poetry
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Calloused palms
They betray such blistered fingers24 lines, 2 comments, August 15 -
Miniature monuments sewn together
A circular diversion caught unaware28 lines, May 16
Guest Book
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Everyones Dead on January 21Love the Showbread quote, of course.
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Wall Door Salad on September 12, 2008here's the link 2 my response: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4592359
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Wall Door Salad on March 28, 2008hey choke. im a high school girl who has been writing since 3rd grade. Im just trying 2 make some new friends. im presently working on my sixth poetry book. i hope u will enjoy my stuff the way i enjoyed yours.
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Everyones Dead on December 27, 2007Your guestbook is empty. Well, not anymore. Keep writing.
