The Untamed One• Show poetry

You know the guy who is always there for his friends, the guy who is too giving, and friendly and always help out. Even the people he dosn't like? You know the nice guy that everyone loves to walk on. Well I'm his half sister's uncle's, grandson's cousin's, best friend's sister's worst enemy.

My poetry style is the basic four lines rythming every second and fourth. Or I'll rythme every line, every once in a while I'll write something different, but you'll never see it(becuase they suck if they don't rythme)

I'm a lover, plain and simple. I love people, aside from the fact they piss me off, I really do love them. They are a source of amusment and inspiration and hopefully one day I'll find that speacil gal.

I want to make an impact, preferrably I want to change the justice system, or something with this country. Don't get me wrong I love it, but the way things are being run in this country just suck. Something needs to change and if possible I intend to help make that push.

I would like to say I don't give out trust too freely anymore, but I've recently realized thats one of my flaws, I'm always way too trusting, even after a betrayal I'll still ignore it for a while, if you've reached a point where I don't trust you, you must done something extremly bad. If I hate then you are usually a very very horrible person

I live for feedback on my poems mainly becuase I don't look at almost anything I do as any good (I was raised to believe I suck at life so I do), so when I get that feedback it helps motivate me to write more. And no one ever reads any of them out here.

I try farily hard to be an optomist, becuase let's face facts in todays world you gotta be able to see the good in front of the bad. And whats depressing is optomism is becoming a lost art. Everyone has to see what sucks as opposed to what was good. Still a line from a song (Even the people who never frown eventually break down) holds true, I go through my pestimistic stages, which if you read enough of my poems come through.

My life's motto has been the same for awhile now. BREAK YOUR CHAINS BECOME UNTAMED, in plain english quit putting on this super slick persona, be yourself in front of people. And if they don't like what they see, then they aren't worth your time.

Love life? What is this love life you speak of? I'm the guy who all the girls like and is funny and kind, you know the nice guy that every girl wants but then never dates. Yeah thats me

Music wise, I like classical alot now, espically when I can feel the emotion the composer originally meant to be felt, otherwise anything that has the word Rock in it I love. The two songs on this page, happen to be my favorite two, (the first being my favorite)

Linkin Park-Pushin Me Away

I've lied to you
The same way that I always do
This is the last smile
That I'll fake for the sake of being with you

(Everything falls apart
Even the people who never frown
Eventually break down)
The sacrifice of hiding in a lie
(Everything has to end
You'll soon find we're out of time left
To watch it all unwind)
The sacrifice is never knowing

Why I never walked away
Why I played myself this way
Now I see you're testing me pushes me away
Why I never walked away
Why I played myself this way
Now I see your testing me pushes me away

I've tried like you
To do everything you wanted too
This is the last time
I'll take the blame for the sake of being with you

(Everything falls apart
Even the people who never frown
Eventually break down)
The sacrifice of hiding in a lie
(Everything has to end
You'll soon find we're out of time left
To watch it all unwind)
The sacrifice is never knowing

Why I never walked away
Why I played myself this way
Now I see you're testing me pushes me away
Why I never walked away
Why I played myself this way
Now I see you're testing me pushes me away
(We're all out of time
This is how we find how it all unwinds)
The sacrifice of hiding in a lie
(We're all out of time
This is how we find how it all unwinds)
The sacrifice is never knowing
Why I never walked away
Why I played myself this way
Now I see you're testing me pushes me away
Why I never walked away
Why I played myself this way
Now I see you're testing me pushes me away
Pushes me away




Cold Night-Socialburn

on these cold nights the silence never helps it's just a wake up call, a wake up fall and i should've braced myself but what fun would that have been i
would have missed out on feeling but i'm not gonna let this faze me i've learned the beauty of letting go and i'm letting you know
[chorus]
that it's
alright i'm right her for you forever on these cold nights i'm right here for you forever on these cold nights i wonder how you make it through does he
hold you, and does he need you like i do when you finally find yourself will you have the strength to say i feel you and god i need you but i'm not gonna
let this phase me cause i've learned the beauty of letting go but i'm still letting you know
[chorus]
i'm not gonna let this phase me [x3]
i've learned
the beauty of letting go i'm letting you know
[chorus]


I don't hide anything about myself except the pain I'm actually in, I don't like attention so much. You could call me a liar though speaking of I've written more then my share of "pain" poems