Have written my best work when at low times in my life(However now going through the best months of my life and still writing something Good or Bad who knows). Hoping to be published one day as a complete works (Poetry of life,trouble and strife), have had one poem published previously. All comments will be appreciated good or bad. I don`t use spell check I write as I feel and sometimes make mistakes but then again life would be boring if we were all perfect.
As this poem of mine seems to be the most liked and it is the poem that I had published I have decided write it here for you all to see more easily. Hope you all have a good day. Remember every day is a new chapter of your life. Live it as your last and you will get more from it.
The Stranger
There`s hatred, anger and pain in those eyes.
No truth or existence, just plain old lies.
Doesn`t judge or mistrust, true self`s in disguise.
From the baby of birth to the old man that dies.
Who can he turn to, family or friends?
When his hearts torn apart it never mends.
He`ll never really live,lets not pretend.
Societies Black Sheep, right to the end.
He longs for a break, a change of life.
A job, house, children and maybe a wife.
When the truth hits home it cuts like a knife.
How does he struggle through such pain and strife.
We all know who he is some say "That`s Me!"
Give him a break,perhaps a little belief.
Look past his cover, he`s no criminal, no thief.
He needs help and hope, don`t let it be.
Or this Stranger To Life will never be free.
My AP FAMILY
Little Sis. Recovering Slowly
( A very talented writer with a heart of gold)
allpoetry.com/ poets/recoveri ng%20slowly
Baby Sis. Sarah Louise Hudson
( Another talented young writer )
allpoetry.com/ poets/Sarah%20 Louise%20Hudso n
Both my sisters above are very talented poets with lots of good work please read more of there poems and give them the applause and comments they deserve.
This link is a poem I would like to dedicate to my little sis.
Claire (Recoveringslowly) after the ordeal she and John went through whilst being attacked during a roadrage incident.allpoetry.com/ Add_line/21115 85
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- Last seen on Dec 7 3:35 AM 2008. Member since March 11, 2006.
- I'm a citrine experience poet for 165 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Live each day as your last, dont dwell on the past".
- I am a 35 year old guy (Great Britain)
- When I'm not writing, I'm supervisor.





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The smile I hide behind a witch is meant to be unkind7 lines, March 29, 2008. In Thoughts
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Behind closed doors
they plot to destroy34 lines, 11 comments, July 28, 2006. In Angst -
Or this Stranger to life will never be free.27 lines, 23 comments, March 11, 2006. In Personal
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Our family was growing a time for love and joy,
soon to hear the gentle crys of my girl or boy24 lines, 4 comments, October 11, 2007 -
As dust just settles on my keys, Right now I long for more,16 lines, 1 comment, September 22, 2007. In Other
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happiness comes to those who wait it seemed to take forever15 lines, 1 comment, September 14, 2007. In life
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earthstar on August 21, 2006Please come and check out my contest hope to see ya later
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earthstar on July 11, 2006thank you for your help i like your page this is very nice i understand when you say you write what you feel i guess i am this way too i just did not see it from another view thanks for the wisdom you are very insightful take care if you need a freind i am here brenda
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gullionmar on July 7, 2006lovely writing thanks for sharing it ok
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