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Friday June 20, 2008. DeeCrepit = Terry-too
Still mine.

My recent surgeries were so wildly successful I threw away the need to be DeeCrepit. Terry-too followed more quickly in those footsteps and hopes not to have been as quickly forgotten. Everything before this date, here in the archive was written while I still was on wheels, with canes, only as DeeCrepit... Please do not delete!

Meanwhile when I discovered my copyrighted name was "available" I took it back. NO WAY would I allow anyone else to mess up my reputation when I can do such a great job of that myself!

I will be writing few poems while in Storywrite, where I do the final edit of my 34-chapter children's novel, to be called "Tabby Disease." There Terry-too follows me.

DeeCrepit's wry discovery:

My Discovery
Nothing I've done or expect to do
warrants waste to read it through.
If you persist though I warned you,
blame yourself for your mil-doooo.

See what I mean? Member since 2004
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August 20 2005
(This place needs a complete overhaul
if ever I can find the time!)

ON CLICKING ON A FEATURED POEM

There is no way to know what we will find
on clicking; all are every bit as blind.
If yours is dark on dark, the secrecy
suggests you really want your privacy.
But if you want a serious critique,
supportive, the kind that we all seek.
Make it available.

Myself? Survived 48 years of marriage,
four kids with kids of their own,
5 grandkids, 35 years of teaching,
a variety of cats and dogs, and one
Masters Degree. Pretty good for a
1940's graduate of grade 8!

I wrote this ending with greatest restraint.
Personal IM attacks on me led to my posting
HIS WORDS verbatim as "Vendetta,"
with no additions from me. He claimed to be a PhD
[PhD's would not behave so arrogantly.]
and Admin deleted Vendetta from MY poem-page
and told me I had broken a rule, with possible
banning. It still hurts.

In AP, an intended victim was blamed!
Someday I hope I can delete it. Not yet.
Addendum June, 2005: Not ever.
I was the object of verbal attack, and I posted it.

For those who are personally attacked for their
disagreement, it documents a long fight and its
unhappy resolution. It can happen to anyone.

And let's change gears! [For years until just now,
6:30 AM, March 15, 06 no one noticed the spelling
mistake in 'clutch.'] It goes beyond courtesy.
[Cluch in, gear shift, gas in / clutch out, GO]

Here is a special acrostic that I enjoyed:
To Terry Gibson (DeeCrepit),

D iscerning as a critic, conscientious as a judge.
E ducated as a writer, (that¡¯s apparent in her verse.)
E nergetic in her utterance; her opinions seldom budge,
C onvincing in her arguments for better or for worse.
R arely found such talent, awe-inspiring skills combined,
E qualling the very best the AP site might find.
P erfected meter, rhyme and phrasing, yet her silken
purse
I ntuitively teaches the uncultivated mind
T hat what we build in life, in death, is what we leave behind.

Hugh Wyles, July 4th.2005.

This is my 'official' welcome to Terry who has honoured me by joining my list of favourites and who has already provided sympathetic and insightful editing of several of my latest works.
Please read some of her writings and you will understand why I am so thrilled to have her on my 'team'.
allpoetry.com/Poets/DeeCrepit

Silver Member angelica on Jul 06, 6:11 said:
Wonderful Hugh, I have given my official welcome as HOH, but will also extend another one here. A wonderful Acrostic you have written for Terry, I know she's going to be a great asset to our group.
Love and hugs
Bea xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Silver Member Mary6 on Jul 06, 8:02 said:
A warm welcome. I have had Terry on my fav list for some time now and think she is a skillful and insightful writer as well as a kind person.

Gold Member MargaretG on Jul 06, 9:32 said:
Terry was on my fave list even before I joined AP - I have had the pleasure of knowing her almost all of my life.
I love your acrostic Hugh, she is an erudite and talented writer, past the age of bowing to others' opinions. Your last two lines are thought provoking, and inspiring too - we younger people must think sometimes of our legacy.

Silver MemberGreeter catz on Jul 06, 2:02 p.m. said:
Terry is indeed a beautiful asset to allpoetry and probably to all the people in her life. He work is exemplary.
Your acrostic for her suits her to a T

Welcome, Terry, to our clan

Silver Member Maureen on Jul 07, 2:37 p.m. said:
Dear Hugh,

Enjoyed your tribute to a very gifted writer. I have had the pleasure of reading her poems and getting to know her in the group "Kindred Souls".

Dee, Welcome to Hugh's favorites. I'm sure you will be very happy here.

Maureen

Thank you all. Sometimes it takes an awful lot of years to find the folks we wish we had known all our lives, but here you are, and the sense of belonging together is an immense source of comfort and happiness. What a wonderful thing to share!
Bless you!
Terry

That's all for now. As I said, this PoetPage still needs work.

Post script 15 September 05 UPDATED FOR 2K6

I returned here with a sense of coming home. Truly strange. Suddenly, I just realized I have been spending altogether too much time in the alternate site here, SharePoetry. I am however, glad I wrote the big one, QUEBEC, MY MUSE AND ME. Huge, including French, a copy of it will be here, along with several others that were polished in SP. For those not ego-bound, it is a great place to improve what we do because empty flattery is discouraged.

Updating 20 April 2005

I am entering my third term of teaching the e-course in punctuation and grammar, Usage updated. PS, not much appreciated. Like who needs it? Hahahahahahaha!

I still tutor 2 hours in the mornings.
I was hired to be webmaster for a new website for local teachers' union. Up and running. Unrest. These two PAY.
Other webwork is recuperating too.

Updated May 12 06: Busy!!!!! Most of the teachers' webwork is done between midnight and 5 AM. It may be a long strike, certainly bitter, and urgent bulletins can come at noon too. I am looking for a two-ended candle I can safely burn!

Still active in Sharepoetry, new poems coming almost daily. How do I turn them off? Not saying they are good. Meanwhile health aches, reminding me I am not seventy anymore, and in July, surgery looms.
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UPDATED March 9, 2008
Surgery, a research procedure, was successful past wildest dreams. Since 1984 when knee surgeries had not healed due to undiscovered diabetes, I had been on wheels. Now, since 2007, with diabetes diet-controlled for a dozen years, I not only do not need wheels, but I walk again like other people! Rejunenating. Yippee!
Terry



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  • Although I have no time to write just now; / (The time that I've spent seated on my chair / has made my butt grow roots to it somehow, / to hold me here and squelch my doctrinaire / reply) yours more succinct tha
    26 lines, 11 comments, June 23, 2007. In Humor

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  • Terry-too : My April 26 history on August 1
    makes me wonder why I have made powerful enemies. Is it part of the human condition?
  • Terry-too : Defeated by Software, by DeeCrepit and Terry-too. on June 20
    Bah humbug.

    I am the author referred-to here, and if I answered
    "Why is this author great?" 'a great' would have to be folllowed by "fool!"

    Are we not allowed to be truthful?
    I AM the author here and just now lost a list of caveats for anyone else who decides to change names.

    If you value something, back it up elsewhere.

    I felt my name should match the truth, and having been surgically rescued from wheels and canes, selected the name Terry-too.

    Result? Do I have to type this again? Deleted, yes.

    All record of my existence had vanished from Sharepoetry, every poem that we had worked on to improve was gone from the archive, and MyPage was blank. The friendly comments that IU valued, gone. It hurts. Not that I had died, but friends had also been lost.

    A password (the same I had used before) allowed me to see these pages in AP or all by DeeCrepit would have been lost to me. I am not yet sure that the archives exist but --

    I have decided to work on my novels in Story-write.
    Of three, there is one in its final edit, a 34-chapter children's book, set up as a series of three smaller books. Phat chance that it will sell, but worth the try. But why do I feel so tired?

    Terry


  • Terry-too : And Life goes on. on June 20
    I now have two names, both my own.

    When surgeries succeeded, and after much physiotherapy, now that I can walk, even trot, up and down stairs and hills like real people, I felt it was time to let my name reflect my new state of wonder. Terry-too fits well.

    B I I I G mistake!
    One, everything needs a password to get in, matching what it was before, or I would not even have seen DeeCrepit-files. Fair enough.

    Two, I discovered everything in Sharepoetry had been deleted. MyPage, the archive, all the comments I valued so much, and miss now. Gone. In the archive used to be the improved versions where friends had helped so much, not saved elsewhere.

    That hurts. 'Quebec, My Muse and Me' escaped that, I hope.

    I have not gone there to check, but I hope the big archive HERE stll exists. If not, I close the book on DeeCrepit the poet, and settle in to do edits of two complete unpublished novels, and one that got to the ninth chapter. Terry-too the novelist.
    Ha! Phat chance, but worth the attempt to sell.

    If anyone is tempted to change identities, back up everything before you start. Then it won't matter that even old friends won't know you. Consider all the enemies left behind, and feel free!

    Terry
  • Terry-too : Messages "do not send" spam on April 26
    Because I try to send Kevin this message but the box is so narrow it garbles it totally. It is messed here too for the same reason. Narrow box.

    Kevin asked me to send a copy of the spam message.
    It could not be hi-lighted for copying.
    I typed it with is spread-out spacing.

    The wide spacing was planned to outwit anyone who tries to IM its format to Kevin. I will send him the message number from my page, where with my luck it will be as garbled as in the IM. Only snail mail would leave its spacing intact.
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    I was alarmed to see the reference in it to allpoetry.

    It becomes far more serious than Kevin thought.
    If I had a digital camera, its photo would expose it.
    Perhaps someone else will send it.

    Now, will "Submit Testimonial" get it too?

    Terry

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