SweetSins

Hello! My name is Arielle and I write almost every day. Most times it is just freestyle stuff. I don't check here often, but I try to update. Most of these poems are years old, but hey thank-you to everyone for reading or commenting! I am not looking to become a professional writer, rather just trying to connect with other people

Last seen on Mar 21 6:11 PM. Member since January 23, 2005.
I'm a carnelian hope poet for 121 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "When someone shows you who they are, believe them.".
I am a 18 year old girl (Canada)
When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
Visit my homepage at www.facebook.com
I have 121 comments, 1 column, 9 poems

My Poetry

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Condemned to be Free

My Lord you are my saviour, I fall to death upon my knees.

44 lines, April 17, 2007. In Angst, Dark, Hope, Life, Thoughts, Pain, Personal
Hate is a strong word

Apr.7/06
Tear drops are falling from the ashen sky.

35 lines, 1 comment, April 17, 2007. In Angst, Dark, Life, Thoughts, Pain
Imagination is a life long sentence.

In the deepest of thoughts, I am untouchable.

32 lines, 2 comments, April 17, 2007. In Angst, Dark, Hope, Life, Thoughts, Pain
The Candle Always Burns

You always gotta have hope!

50 lines, 3 comments, January 23, 2005. In Hope

Guest Book

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SweetSins on March 15, 2005

Thank you for writing on my page . You have beautiful poetry and I love it. I agree most great poets are unstructed and dun make sense to the ones who have not felt their emotions. I admire them. I wish I could write like them someday and I love jus writin my feelings and gettin out what I have to say. Thank you for your time to read!
monkeysee72 on March 6, 2005

the point of poetry isn't always what makes sense to others but what makes us feel. The very best poets in this world sometimes are the most unstructured and make less sense to those of us who haven't felt what they felt when they wrote thier poems. Never feel you need to have guidence in your work, after all your writting your most intamate feelings, needs and desires and only you know how you feel while you are writting. Anything that you write is poetry, if not to anyone else but you, then that is what counts. Thanky you for your comment on my poem, it was really sweet, and I personally think you are doing a fine job! Keep your chin up, this is a great way to realive stress and release pent up feelings!
SweetSins on February 23, 2005

thanx for leavin comments on my work! Lol my written's deep. look at yurs!!!! I love it, it all makes sense strangly lol. Keep writtin kid!
Bob Knoxx on February 20, 2005

Hey, i love your writen, i love the deepness of them. and thanks for writen about my stuff
Bob