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*\Hey im 19.I like writting poems, I mainly write them depending on what mood im in. However the reason to why i enjoy writing my poems is because it enables me to express my feelings and emotions. As when im feeling a little down i usually write poems expressing my emotions. Well il keep on writing and so do you!



Concrete Angel
She walks to school with the lunch she packed
Nobody knows what she's holdin' back
Wearin' the same dress she wore yesterday
She hides the bruises with linen and lace

The teacher wonders but she doesn't ask
It's hard to see the pain behind the mask
Bearing the burden of a secret storm
Sometimes she wishes she was never born

Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
Concrete angel

Somebody cries in the middle of the night
The neighbors hear, but they turn out the lights
A fragile soul caught in the hands of fate
When morning comes it'll be too late

Repeat Chorus

A statue stands in a shaded place
An angel girl with an upturned face
A name is written on a polished rock
A broken heart that the world forgot

Repeat Chorus

These are the lyrics from the song called Concrete Angel which is a song by Martina McBride...i just love these lyrics and she is a brilliant singer!

Which other bands or pop stars i like????
Orite il name'em now!-Evanescence-Avril Lavigne,Linkinparc-Christina!-Kelly Clarkson!-Mc Fly!!!!-Delta Goodram!-Martina McBride-Britney!-Eminem (definately! !!)-G-Unit!-Usher-JoJo-kkk i get it your gettin bored!


Me hobbies????- reading n writting poems!-and oh ye books!-music!!(definately!)-shoppin!!!-socialising; going out n about with my friends!!!-playing volleyball and other sports!!!--but most of all spending time with my boyfriend!!!!he is the best!and i love him to bits!

Check out these people too......theyr brilliant and very talented poets and i bet there are many more out there to be discovered......

Midnight Angel16-- allpoetry.com/poets/Midnight%20Angel16

eternalpoet(Vic)-- allpoetry.com/poets/eternalpoet

Mayank-- allpoetry.com/poets/Mayank

Parth-- allpoetry.com/poets/parth

xXxDark SecretsxXx-- allpoetry.com/poets/xXxDark%20SecretsxXx

And theres many more........
rite well ermm...im off for now!!!
Cya every1!
Tnkx for visitin my page!
Take care every1 ... ...
*mwah*

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  • Last seen on Oct 4 2:52 PM. Member since April 22, 2005.
  • I'm a obsidian idea poet for 607 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Once you loose me, youl never find me".
  • I am a 19 year old girl (Great Britain)
  • I have 607 comments, 155 poems

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  • eternalpoet : Hellloo?? on July 9, 2007
    .. It's been ages. Where have you been?

    I hope you are fine. Do reply, if possible .

    Take cares and have a nice time. *hugs and kisses*. Much love.

    - Vic
  • The Anonymous on September 16, 2006
    I'm the one that writes (as in "gives") tragedies (for others!!! ).

    PS It matches my "Pathetic Loser" Label (self-labelled )
  • Sweet Angel16 on September 16, 2006
    oi ello 'the lord of tragedy' lolz whats with that name??.....ive been fine wat wabt u?.....n lolz about me page....i wud edit it bt it wnt let me put a pic of my own for the background though lolz
  • The Anonymous on September 16, 2006
    haaah ...I'm, now, called "The Lord Of Tragedy".

    Anyway how have you beeeeen??????

    Mayank.

    PS Edit your page

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