- Last seen on Oct 8 7:45 AM. Member since August 22, 2007.
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, and quote is Tryin to figure out fate business. - I am a 27 year old woman (United Arab Emirates)
- When I'm not writing, I'm Worring about other .
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sgking123 : excellent on July 3But yes all this insanity has to end
Reality is not this mind said
Heart as always a traitor
Followed the insane ways that he has
terrific and emotional...your choice of words was great too.scene,emtions blended to bring out the state of mind.do comemnt on others in my portfolio. -
Rovingone on June 28Yes, you are! Fabulous sentiments and a excellently crafted poem! More please.
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Susan John Francis : My First Poem on the community so please be gentle about your comments on August 22, 2007Just read on and lemme know if i am gr8.....
Was it love or my senses wild that day
Drunk or the drinks sweet in a way
You were close or alcohol enough for the day
You touched me or was I in the way.
Never before have I felt a stranger to myself
To be with you is all what I want to have
Those eyes perfect for the glair that you have
Close it before I loose a bit of grace left in myself
Beautiful light and drinks by my side
I hope it’s the drinks that had the effect
Feet’s not touching the ground
Yes I was walking in the clouds
But yes all this insanity has to end
Reality is not this mind said
Heart as always a traitor
Followed the insane ways that he has ,
Sunlight followed me through that night
Opened my eyes before I could realize
Was that a dream or my imagination
But yeah that night was a real sensation .
Susan Francis -14-08-07
